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JustDaniel
post May 13 05, 10:54
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Septolet

The Septolet  consists of seven lines containing fourteen words written in two parts with a break in between them, each part dealing with the same thought… to create one picture (to a degree, somewhat like the concept of haiku/senryu — which contain two snapshots of aspects of the same reality).

I stop


I stop
my ears
to hear

your fingers
singing
fragrant pictures,
seeing transparent love

© Daniel J Ricketts 30 Nov 2004

just duet

tenor
gives orchestra
human voice

baritone's antiphon
echoes appreciation
for soloist…
now in harmony

© Daniel J Ricketts 24 Nov 2004

Thank God

thanks-giving
for Blockbusters,
football, turkeys,
tryptophan… or

gratitude for life,
shelter, food,
safe family?

© Daniel J Ricketts 24 Nov 2004


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