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Septolet
The Septolet consists of seven lines containing fourteen words written in two parts with a break in between them, each part dealing with the same thought… to create one picture (to a degree, somewhat like the concept of haiku/senryu — which contain two snapshots of aspects of the same reality). I stop I stop my ears to hear your fingers singing fragrant pictures, seeing transparent love © Daniel J Ricketts 30 Nov 2004 just duet tenor gives orchestra human voice baritone's antiphon echoes appreciation for soloist… now in harmony © Daniel J Ricketts 24 Nov 2004 Thank God thanks-giving for Blockbusters, football, turkeys, tryptophan… or gratitude for life, shelter, food, safe family? © Daniel J Ricketts 24 Nov 2004 ·······  ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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JustDaniel wry toast
Marines halve
the apples
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to the core
said
the worm
couple
our... Aug 18 17, 07:58 JustDaniel what wood bee would be
sand bored
through
the wor... Aug 18 17, 09:21 Larry loose stockings
maiden’s mantle
is her apparent
m... Aug 19 17, 18:41 JustDaniel who's your daddy?
one available
to hang out
i... Aug 19 17, 22:19 Larry dearest related
daughter
elates me
and will
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covered land
with limb debris... Aug 21 17, 10:25 Larry tongue in chink
toppling one side,
excavating
ant... Aug 22 17, 09:39 JustDaniel tongue in chink
opened
my mouth
just wide enough
... Aug 22 17, 14:42 Larry having a triumph
habit
ascribes your
various lite... Aug 23 17, 11:40 JustDaniel bitter truth
a truth
becomes a lie
in the mouth
o... Aug 23 17, 13:30 Larry bite the tongues
bait
is so
tempting when
explori... Aug 24 17, 15:16 JustDaniel eros errors
expressive desires
reveal themselves
... Aug 24 17, 16:27 Larry tiger is extinct
turned loose
in complex
governme... Aug 25 17, 17:59 JustDaniel slip gloss
symbiotic defeat
leaves him
alone, pou... Aug 28 17, 01:08 Larry lying to satisfy
lips gloss
youthful area;
innoce... Aug 28 17, 23:28 JustDaniel wittischism
aural play:
the heart
of puns
they ... Aug 31 17, 07:32 Larry tension results
the humor
escapes some
novice r... Aug 31 17, 14:45 JustDaniel kneaded
explanations
often ruin
a good pun;
if t... Sep 1 17, 14:35 Larry finding thought
“forget it”
is tough
now, so
don’... Sep 4 17, 21:24 JustDaniel GIVE OUT TETHERS
gain insight
in one
visit
enter... Sep 18 17, 11:29 Larry nothing strange
“Not yours!”
opens argument
t... Sep 19 17, 10:22 JustDaniel INJECTS NEEDLES
interjection
needles are
just fin... Sep 20 17, 11:11 Larry various streaks
veins
are just
routes for
ingeste... Sep 20 17, 23:59 JustDaniel SURFACE SCRATCH
surfaces
under shellac
resist a m... Sep 28 17, 11:54 Larry someone hears it
scratch-
offs are
my panacea;
ex... Sep 29 17, 20:23 JustDaniel earn
a living
by getting
off your butt
once you s... Sep 30 17, 09:55 Larry hire a bull
for servicing
all your
cows
if he’s a... Oct 3 17, 13:22 JustDaniel cow word:
moo is
the only one
sometimes
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makes splashes
when he
lands
soaked ... Oct 4 17, 21:35 JustDaniel color whale
grey-blue
with a splash
of white
its ... Oct 12 17, 15:39 Larry iambics elude me
impressive
and often dull
make y... Oct 15 17, 06:52 JustDaniel NUANCES ELUDE ME
Nuance
unusual
about you?
Night... Oct 19 17, 13:00 Larry sponges get damp
supporting
people
on welfare lis... Oct 20 17, 21:06 JustDaniel HIT YOUR PERFIDY
help
inside me
takes your
yellow... Oct 22 17, 09:02 Larry scribe’s younger
story
can appear to
reach you
in... Oct 23 17, 21:16 JustDaniel SOONERS STYLE IT
Sooners
outwit
Oklahoma; try
not... Oct 24 17, 09:49 Larry barters tease me
bet
and lose
regularly by a
toss... Oct 25 17, 10:24 JustDaniel TOASTER EXPIRED
time
often won't fix
a pop-up... Oct 28 17, 00:21 Larry usually saddens
untoasted remains
sprinkle area
u... Oct 30 17, 08:46 JustDaniel PLEASED TODDLER
paddle bat
laminated to
embrace s... Oct 30 17, 11:30 Larry primate females
padded duff
rounded derriere,
imp... Oct 31 17, 23:13 JustDaniel SIMILAR PORTENT
slap
it into
my hair
I cannot
le... Nov 4 17, 06:21 Larry require the best
removing it
extends youth;
quies... Nov 4 17, 22:29 JustDaniel I REJECT ECONOMY
ineptitude
rejects economic logi... Nov 9 17, 16:30 Larry yule log - yew logs
yesterday,
used tree
limbs an... Nov 10 17, 19:12 JustDaniel FLAMING SYSTEMS
forest fires
limit any
alien... Nov 15 17, 07:50 Larry growing some man
generating bolts
refers to
opera... Nov 15 17, 14:12 JustDaniel ELECTRO-STUNNED
electrical stunners
likely might
... Nov 17 17, 00:24 Larry chaos in stars do
Charged particles
help light
au... Nov 18 17, 15:10 JustDaniel KNEADED DOUGH OK
kneaded
nightly to
enrapture you... Nov 19 17, 14:21 Larry two rail support
trick shots:
when you
overshot c... Nov 20 17, 23:09 JustDaniel LIGHTER TORCHED
light
injected into
good paper
h... Nov 21 17, 16:51 Larry rain-man deposit
raging cloud,
ancient brave
in c... Nov 21 17, 23:02 JustDaniel NITWITS' TEAPOTS
Now wet
I escape
to a
weathe... Nov 26 17, 08:48 Larry sister’s symbols
stupid cousins
intermarry
some b... Nov 27 17, 22:59 JustDaniel HICCUPS SET PACE
husband's
incontinence
cause... Nov 28 17, 07:37 Larry prefers elderly
person’s age
reveals toll
encount... Nov 28 17, 16:07 Larry save the yule log
suspending harmony
as you
vicio... Dec 6 17, 12:06 JustDaniel GUTTERS GET DEEP
giving
unexpected knife
tearing ... Dec 12 17, 17:53 Larry mind the pimples
makeup
indicates I
need them
dri... Dec 14 17, 16:32 Larry evening escapes
eliminate
vexing things,
enjoying... Dec 28 17, 09:16 JustDaniel snoring?
massage
relaxes me
to sleep;
I must
be ... Jan 19 18, 07:51 Larry never is fresher
new leaf
emerges for
vernal eve,... Jan 21 18, 10:40 JustDaniel low-hanging testees
far
be it
from me
to protest
... Jan 22 18, 16:59 Larry instant present
I’ll help
needs for
surprise,
the... Jan 23 18, 12:17 JustDaniel undercover task
tears depart
when needle
pulls th... Jan 24 18, 12:52 Larry yellows streaks
your drawers’
experiment
limits y... Jan 24 18, 22:53 JustDaniel Restraint
stained shorts
renewed
by bleach;
too ... Jan 25 18, 07:04 Larry canvas logic
up short
is a
misnomer
of sorts
unl... Jan 25 18, 14:47 JustDaniel appearances
long
down penis
turned up
one night
... Feb 4 18, 14:46 Larry real was logical
reveal
everything to
another bei... Feb 6 18, 09:31 JustDaniel shot in the armature
tranquil
pancreas
secretes h... Feb 6 18, 13:04 Larry by three to agree
boost
yours to
the fourteen are... Feb 6 18, 23:30 JustDaniel reduction production
decrease
your words
to thirt... Feb 8 18, 08:42 Larry nothing to add up
non-septolet
offers no
true age... Feb 9 18, 15:01 JustDaniel grainy image
grain
from trip
around the field:
y... Feb 9 18, 16:19 Larry yield is under it
you
invade when
everything’s ha... Feb 11 18, 00:11 JustDaniel Unclear Pix
see wheat
in the field?
take pictures... Feb 15 18, 13:07 Larry grown up young ‘un
granny
reacts to
offer you
wis... Feb 16 18, 08:27 Larry trying a senator
teens
realize
your automatic gun... Feb 23 18, 08:38 JustDaniel HUNTERS SHOUT IT
Hunters
uphold law with
no desir... Feb 24 18, 15:47 Larry screech the tire
shout
curses with
resultant ire
... Feb 25 18, 14:39 JustDaniel LITTLER LETTERS
late fall
is white
time at
the fo... Mar 3 18, 09:34 Larry nothing slanted
newspapers’
official
typical crit... Mar 5 18, 15:13 JustDaniel PRINTED DESKTOP
printed
response
included pieces
... Apr 28 18, 10:44 Larry deals on printer
desktop
eases your
alibi
letters... Apr 29 18, 22:22 JustDaniel PAINTED RIPPLES
painter
answered what I
intended ... May 27 18, 13:20 Larry danger’s strange
determine ants
are not
near
good... May 28 18, 10:01 JustDaniel seamless edibles
stretch out
over the body
this d... May 29 18, 19:02 Larry staying younger
seemly
trying to
afford you
yeste... May 30 18, 19:05 JustDaniel GALLING REALITY
getting older
adventure
lasts wit... May 31 18, 01:41 Larry Gladly,
a Christian Grizzly
with vision
problems;
... May 31 18, 22:43 JustDaniel bear
with me;
pass
pyonder
when the roll
is calle... Jun 1 18, 14:42 Larry if it’s an egg date
I’ll be there
feasting
if coo... Jun 3 18, 13:25 JustDaniel DENIZEN ERUPTED
dear me!
editor
nudges you
in... Jun 3 18, 17:31 Larry legs are delight
leopard
elegance
gets real
since... Jun 5 18, 08:40 JustDaniel TIGHTLY YOU'D WAD
Tightly
I've wadded to... Jun 6 18, 14:29 Larry metal is desired
manufactured
each piece
to speci... Jun 7 18, 13:17 
JustDaniel SUCCESS DAMAGES
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utilizes a
custom
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