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Septolet
The Septolet consists of seven lines containing fourteen words written in two parts with a break in between them, each part dealing with the same thought… to create one picture (to a degree, somewhat like the concept of haiku/senryu — which contain two snapshots of aspects of the same reality). I stop I stop my ears to hear your fingers singing fragrant pictures, seeing transparent love © Daniel J Ricketts 30 Nov 2004 just duet tenor gives orchestra human voice baritone's antiphon echoes appreciation for soloist… now in harmony © Daniel J Ricketts 24 Nov 2004 Thank God thanks-giving for Blockbusters, football, turkeys, tryptophan… or gratitude for life, shelter, food, safe family? © Daniel J Ricketts 24 Nov 2004 ·······  ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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JustDaniel Septolet May 13 05, 10:54 
Larry when shorts
hang down
past your
knees
they’re eit... Jun 22 16, 11:04 JustDaniel pushback
about long shorts:
some of mine
go past m... Jun 26 16, 13:54 Larry shorts
can be
of any length
necessary
as long as
... Jun 27 16, 22:31 JustDaniel briefs
hang out
when some guys
roam the streets
i... Jun 28 16, 01:48 Larry walk
of shame
originated
in prisons
emulating tho... Jun 29 16, 10:11 JustDaniel hooded men
roam the night
in search
of victims
he... Jun 30 16, 18:43 Larry helpful
would be
their mothers’
guiding hands
app... Jul 3 16, 14:39 JustDaniel nonverbally
my absence
has spoken
loudly
setbacks... Jul 12 16, 03:24 Larry visiting
is all
some old
members do,
writing and ... Jul 12 16, 18:41 JustDaniel needed:
time to think
to do critique
hope to
hav... Jul 14 16, 03:23 Larry moved to country
moved critic,
organizing to
vac... Jul 14 16, 21:29 Larry objectives
are plans
or goals
we set
for ourselve... Jul 20 16, 19:48 JustDaniel ain't movin'
trying
to stay afloat
in thi... Jul 26 16, 02:58 Larry summer’s workout
slow
up to
make your
mending tas... Jul 26 16, 16:24 JustDaniel Present Exigecnies
I won't quit
even though
a... Jul 30 16, 10:46 Larry don’t try to until…
Duties persist
obviating scen... Jul 31 16, 14:21 JustDaniel unflagging hope
unfurled
a flag
on my front porch... Aug 2 16, 04:26 Larry pants before pants
long
for completion
in renova... Aug 2 16, 23:24 JustDaniel long and short of it
shorts
are preferred
in the ... Aug 7 16, 14:54 Larry weight and see
the fall
approaches with
chilly wi... Aug 8 16, 23:26 JustDaniel sparring partners
a belt
is what
you need
for ins... Aug 12 16, 07:19 Larry in sure aint’s
safe
in wall
concealed behind
a po... Aug 12 16, 19:58 JustDaniel sure picked
a hot day
to work
buying
air conditio... Aug 13 16, 11:51 Larry inside
dimensions are
measured in
cubic feet
pai... Aug 13 16, 18:22 JustDaniel square feet
make painting
hard enough
all hands
o... Aug 14 16, 12:20 Larry painted my house
problem
approached by
intelligen... Aug 15 16, 18:16 JustDaniel de siding's
celebration
was short-lived
Larry... Aug 16 16, 08:20 Larry inferior
language skills
caused confusion
when pur... Aug 16 16, 22:22 JustDaniel enter rear
to keep ahead
of cancer scare
proctolo... Aug 17 16, 10:37 Larry rectum’s secured
results
enhanced knowledge
causi... Aug 18 16, 08:51 JustDaniel SHATTER OUR VIEW
secured to
help you
assess our
T... Aug 19 16, 16:30 Larry hope was drowned
how could
ocean’s water
penetrat... Aug 21 16, 14:32 JustDaniel COULDN'T DECLARE
cared
once
upon an epic;
lif... Aug 23 16, 08:52 Larry living’s eternal
life
is a short
visitation where... Aug 23 16, 21:53 JustDaniel SMARTER LECHERS
soul
mates are
actually tragic
re... Sep 3 16, 09:53 Larry reality shifted
ranchers kiss
earth
and ski
lengt... Sep 3 16, 14:02 JustDaniel HUMBLED DESSERT
horse buckled
under pressure
muck... Sep 4 16, 10:57 Larry down in a torrent
drain culvert
overflowed; so
w... Sep 5 16, 14:58 Larry sweeter than sex
street
with fresh
eats’ aroma
en... Sep 28 16, 23:07 JustDaniel free voice
relax
the rules
from time
to time
wri... Feb 9 17, 17:21 Larry beautified
your will
to improve
certain aspects
o... Feb 10 17, 11:26 JustDaniel end result
progress
toward death
takes no effort
... Feb 10 17, 19:31 Larry peripheral results
actions
are derived
from react... Feb 13 17, 00:24 JustDaniel the kick
physical
allowed boy
to play football
at... Feb 15 17, 07:46 Larry co-sign
physics will
enable
boy to play
football
... Feb 15 17, 12:46 JustDaniel iron will grid
will left
entire estate
to son
wit... Feb 15 17, 13:07 Larry view pints
sports bars
are for watching
various
v... Feb 17 17, 13:37 JustDaniel audio no
See TV
at restaurant?
Why's it there... Feb 18 17, 06:27 Larry sounding off
spoken languages
are learned
when on... Feb 19 17, 00:19 JustDaniel dumpings
mouth
of the river
swallows horizon
for... Feb 19 17, 07:36 Larry probe limns
ant spits
out chemical
messages
to ot... Feb 20 17, 09:33 JustDaniel response sieve
cheeky sonnets
are likely
to be
ig... Feb 20 17, 11:34 Larry am you late?
to walk
one learns
to crawl
first,
... Feb 21 17, 10:56 JustDaniel un-response sieve
something
tells me
you didn... Feb 21 17, 13:26 Larry simple fie
response
to your post
is forthcoming
s... Feb 22 17, 14:47 JustDaniel nor reason
words
confuse me
so perhaps
just a let... Feb 22 17, 16:53 Larry in cry mental
to rhyme is
my forte
when answerin... Feb 24 17, 00:30 JustDaniel in stitches
suture self
is my suggestion
for do-i... Feb 24 17, 04:11 Larry plug din
cell
phones are
no longer
for talking
t... Feb 25 17, 09:51 JustDaniel behind times?
charging
my cell phone
but I prefer... Feb 26 17, 06:23 Larry tired feat
ran out
of gas
on my
trip
because I
k... Feb 28 17, 14:37 JustDaniel advice to old clunkers
old clunkers
if pushed
sho... Mar 1 17, 08:22 Larry dem. hip-ocracy
consider rationing
immigration vi... Mar 2 17, 22:13 JustDaniel bugger kings
matter
or not
some folks
do not care... Mar 3 17, 17:22 Larry de-tour
their way
might be
what they
want
but it... Mar 5 17, 15:28 JustDaniel Muffet Missing
whey there
was splattered
all over... Mar 7 17, 12:31 Larry muffed it
threw curds
at the
weigh station
attend... Mar 8 17, 09:17 JustDaniel sand witches
mother truckers
have sons
of beaches... Mar 10 17, 07:08 Larry crap chute
vending
machines are
like playing slot... Mar 10 17, 18:46 JustDaniel back-ups
back trouble
is normal
for truck
drivers... Mar 11 17, 00:41 Larry turtle logic
neck
problems
can be solved
with cau... Mar 12 17, 00:20 JustDaniel film add-ons
out-taking
can produce
many a laugh
... Mar 15 17, 10:47 Larry turn on
press your
off switch
by the
bed
so you... Mar 16 17, 10:38 JustDaniel danger
de light
on de wall
will dispel
de dark
d... Mar 16 17, 11:41 Larry no basis
despairs
of the spares
when he’s
bowling... Mar 17 17, 07:58 JustDaniel Justin Casey
struck out
with bases
loaded
two out... Mar 20 17, 12:11 Larry also ran
runs by three
competitors
in the
race
b... Mar 20 17, 23:15 JustDaniel handy off
from last
the sprinter
moved
into first... Mar 21 17, 12:25 JustDaniel handy off
from last
the sprinter
moved
into first... Mar 21 17, 12:25 Larry reel to real
the tape
had been
erased
in secret
... Mar 23 17, 08:57 JustDaniel e-fishent
on line
was a huge
white tuna
he reele... Mar 23 17, 12:20 Larry wood knot
click beetles
are pests
found in
trees
... Mar 24 17, 21:09 JustDaniel impressions
boring
is awl
he can be
wood work
wi... Mar 25 17, 13:00 Larry closed quarters
he’s wholly
committed
to changing... Mar 28 17, 13:02 JustDaniel the skins
washing tons
of lawn derrieres
gridiron... Mar 28 17, 16:57 Larry rub-a-dub
launder rings
around collars
with good
... Mar 30 17, 08:13 JustDaniel shape up
his tub bourn
midriff belts
your senses... Mar 30 17, 10:48 Larry stage right
For appearances
on Broadway
most acto... Apr 1 17, 21:10 JustDaniel roll-out
his role
as Pillsbury
dough boy
grew lar... Apr 2 17, 12:24 Larry stirring breakfast
lumpy
oatmeal or
cream of whea... Apr 3 17, 23:49 JustDaniel immaculate digestion?
if not used
one wonders
whe... Apr 4 17, 09:15 Larry laying a round
two exit
the hen house
after using... Apr 5 17, 20:02 JustDaniel egg role
eggs sit
nesting
for fetching
daughter
... Apr 6 17, 03:58 Larry eggs act science
to cook them,
separate
whites fr... Apr 6 17, 23:31 JustDaniel no man a low?
out of view
potato chips
hide in my... Apr 7 17, 15:15 Larry see in you
masculine
physiques
don’t make you
a m... Apr 10 17, 18:24 JustDaniel turd-a-loo
anything
goes in
an old outhouse
noth... Apr 10 17, 19:02 Larry lever alone
pump sits
over well
and works
fine
... Apr 13 17, 13:32 JustDaniel monkey business
primate
watches you
to copy
your ... Apr 13 17, 15:08 
Larry dead end streak
you stole
the skin
off the
skunk
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