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Feb 10 17, 11:26
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beautified
your will to improve certain aspects of form,
meter, rhythm and rhyme may progress
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Feb 10 17, 19:31
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end result
progress toward death takes no effort when age
takes over nearly all your actions
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Feb 13 17, 00:24
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peripheral results
actions are derived from reactions to external stimuli
causing internal corollaries which become physical
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Feb 15 17, 07:46
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the kick
physical allowed boy to play football at school
Mom worried that play's too physical
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Feb 15 17, 12:46
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co-sign
physics will enable boy to play football
words to mother won’t help; physique will
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Feb 15 17, 13:07
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iron will grid
will left entire estate to son with conditions:
no gridiron or other contact sports
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Feb 17 17, 13:37
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view pints
sports bars are for watching various venues
to the end until they can’t see
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Feb 18 17, 06:27
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audio no
See TV at restaurant? Why's it there?
None can hear a sentence that's spoken.
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Feb 19 17, 00:19
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sounding off
spoken languages are learned when one listens
repeating them is always word of mouth
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Feb 19 17, 07:36
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dumpings
mouth of the river swallows horizon
forming landforms like deltas sand bars and spits
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Feb 20 17, 09:33
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probe limns
ant spits out chemical messages to others;
its directions are not tongue in cheek
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Feb 20 17, 11:34
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response sieve
cheeky sonnets are likely to be ignored
serious writers better off to walk on
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Feb 21 17, 10:56
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am you late?
to walk one learns to crawl first,
to run means you’re up to something
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Feb 21 17, 13:26
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un-response sieve
something tells me you didn't get it;
I was hinting about my sonnet response.
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Feb 22 17, 14:47
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simple fie
response to your post is forthcoming soon;
I’ll try to use some small words
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Feb 22 17, 16:53
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nor reason
words confuse me so perhaps just a letter
correspondence does not have to rhyme
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Feb 24 17, 00:30
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in cry mental
to rhyme is my forte when answering posts;
short words aren’t my strong suit
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Feb 24 17, 04:11
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in stitches
suture self is my suggestion for do-it-yourself minor surgery kit
think it would sell?
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Feb 25 17, 09:51
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plug din
cell phones are no longer for talking
they’re computers full of bull for charging
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Feb 26 17, 06:23
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behind times?
charging my cell phone but I prefer cash
seems like I always run out
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