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Aug 28 15, 20:23
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broke the rules many times before I learned to write inside lines that give you the freedom to know what is coming next and lets others know what they can expect when you don't cheat or forget
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Aug 29 15, 21:52
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get enough of knowledge and experience to express what you mean with the least words possible containing feelings you would share and readers will be lured to your flame
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Aug 30 15, 19:25
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no bit
flame my work and toss ash to the north wind (while you're facing south so your eyes don't get sprayed. We can't have even one tear....) Thankfully there'll be nothing left to read.... yes, no obituary!
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Sep 1 15, 22:41
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re: your last left nothing much to start with through clever design or just by accident so I’m left grasping at straws on how to reply to your post thus, a long meandering complaint
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Sep 3 15, 05:37
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plain to see you didn't struggle that much; I did have the thought that you may have a pause but I know well your finesse and I had confidence that you would grow a rose that is full of sense
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Sep 3 15, 15:36
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syncopate elocution
since you feel naught is too curt; my critic, obviously you, proclaims that what I sent appropriate and that I, taking liberties as we do, educed something by interaction
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Sep 4 15, 04:01
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stim u later
shun I'll not to produce a piece of rot when fresh eludes me; I would not have you wait to respond with something more meaningful than my piece of tripe so we'll continue to poke and prod
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Sep 4 15, 14:20
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presents of mind
prudes adjust their mind-set as the years pass and the morals change but most christian people maintain their beliefs through life caring little for peer pressures because their leader has no equal
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Sep 5 15, 01:09
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quell your fears and your tears because in truth the future is sure even though we are not clear on what it will be like, but that doesn't matter because since He'll be there it's okay with me
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Sep 6 15, 08:51
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mainly, the eerie tale
me, alone in my fear negates what I likely know to be yarns told, that are suspect, turning off truth; it is a horrid thing that my denial evokes shivers to spread down my spine.
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Sep 6 15, 13:52
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STARTLING EGOMANIAC
spine tingling art can do r e a l i s m to spawn an aura like that of any man insisting that his own I never takes a back seat to a generic idiosyncratic Did someone say Trump?
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Sep 6 15, 21:34
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Hillary’s Big Top or taking in a clown’s act
tic and scowl kept her too irate to show new proof that had been garnered by agencies including the N S A; no mail was unpatriotic and were deemed secret after the fact
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Sep 7 15, 05:58
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Does this have to make sense?AN ALSO-RAN CAN DEBATE
arc nova alien - lover placed ad supporting a free oriental back rub; remembered his pro rata authorization when last night no one was there to see what he'd done.
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Sep 7 15, 18:24
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de range of electable
done every poll regarding me and those civic neophytes would not go for my agenda expounding on who to rob or steal from to pay every bill financed or not by the gullible
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Sep 8 15, 04:24
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GIST OF BAD-LEND BIRDS
gull is able so often to just un-lend our fries by the gob from our very hands. I barely purchased our order at the boardwalk when the rats had dived down and relieved us of our fries.
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Sep 8 15, 15:50
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fabricate seasoning
fries and shake by the sea reveal no clues into how those two can taste so darn good when at the beach sunning but I think it has to do with the fun eating out instead of fine dining
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Sep 10 15, 02:52
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DO THE DINE ESCALATOR
dine on worms to end tic; healing aura encapsulates all dining on dahlia inspiration, hinting at nocturnal critter bravado ending that uncomfortable blur
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Sep 10 15, 18:57
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beginning to torture
blunt ends to get the most info into nice cones on paper, now, make some sense of it including the things which you need to say in anagrams for getting your point across with good style
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Sep 11 15, 11:03
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SOMETIMES ENTERTAIN
style often means a lot even when one takes the time to hear issues that you don't want mentioned under some aura; entertain folks - that is what I sometimes want to be able to gain
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Sep 13 15, 15:12
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goal is set – needs made
gain or lose, always see life is not hard; it is the changes. success and failure seem subject to fate or karma, effort and desire are needed to realize the goals one may crave
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