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Aug 31 14, 13:49
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Buddy's muffin missed in the nice friendly food fight he threw one crueler
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Aug 31 14, 14:30
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a thrown up cruller comes down in the coffee; not a sweet exchange
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Aug 31 14, 22:57
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exchange a sweet knot for a tie that does not bind; Gordian problems
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Sep 1 14, 11:02
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discordant problem: disobedient cat chased across piano
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Sep 1 14, 13:50
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a crushed piano which was pushed from the penthouse has played its swan song
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Sep 1 14, 17:41
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he splayed the swan's long white prominent neck; ninja sword slipped
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Sep 2 14, 10:27
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ninja's slip had soared overhead in the attack exposed his weakness
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Sep 2 14, 15:23
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his weakness exposed: the loving father chose between job and home
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Sep 3 14, 13:16
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jab home in between tiny lots with little room do not swing your cat
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Sep 3 14, 18:37
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cats with ring worms often visit sewing circles; they are shoed out
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Sep 4 14, 08:36
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they're chews are all out tobacco and bubblegum base balls in the park
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Sep 4 14, 11:58
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bass bawls in the park after the quartet leaves him; a discordant night
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Sep 4 14, 23:11
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accordion knights playing music much too loud joined an all mail band
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Sep 5 14, 09:15
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all males banned from sorority party; most clothes optional
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Sep 5 14, 10:29
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optional clothing consists of color and size the latter matters
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Sep 5 14, 12:11
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the ladder matters scaling electrical lines; does it conduct?
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Sep 5 14, 14:46
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It does conduct but not rock and roll music, only the long hair
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Sep 6 14, 03:02
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only the long hair fell when I sheared my head; bare for hospital
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Sep 7 14, 12:23
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bear for hospital quite naked at the camp site is shot fitting in
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Sep 7 14, 14:11
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in a fit, he shot at someone leaving the house but missed her mister
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