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> Senryu, Japanese form: 5-7-5 or less
JustDaniel
post Apr 9 14, 12:02
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loss of a lifetime:
refusal to be revived
if I'm really dead


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post Apr 9 14, 23:15
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am I really dead
or in a comatose state
for the next lifetime


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post Apr 10 14, 09:40
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a long-necked lifetime
is common for a giraffe...
or your cute honey?


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Larry
post Apr 11 14, 17:00
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your acute honey
is very sharp to the taste
so are bee's stingers


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post Apr 14 14, 19:49
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some be's stingers
and some be's not;
set insect aside


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post Apr 15 14, 23:14
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Daniel,

I've no answer for this one but if you add a title, it would be a nice Faux Ku!

Larry


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post Apr 16 14, 13:05
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Okay, Larry.... how about "bee-lated" ?


bedside insect
can give you the itch;
it bares moving


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post Apr 16 14, 23:42
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its bears are moving
multiplying while they slept
Yellowstone springtime


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post Apr 17 14, 06:39
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yellowed stone spring
runs down the furrow;
old dog looks relieved



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post Apr 21 14, 23:06
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relief for old dogs
is a small hill to stand on
he need one leg up


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post Apr 22 14, 15:03
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given a leg up
the arthritic runner shines;
red toes in the sun


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post Apr 23 14, 13:50
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red sons being towed,
Indians in the sail set
on the wrong schooner.


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post May 23 14, 19:53
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schooner or later
everyone gets it wrong;
captain drinks in port


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post May 27 14, 18:52
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the captain drinks port,
while the crew has to drink grog
to get their sea legs.


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post May 28 14, 01:36
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to get to see legs
the crew mans the stairway;
things are looking up


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post Jun 2 14, 13:00
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looking up at things
you may have things looking back
gravitating sight


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post Jun 2 14, 23:47
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gravitating site:
the magnetic draw
of a polling place


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post Jun 3 14, 23:21
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of polling places:
sometimes you don't get to vote
something smells fishy


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post Jun 30 14, 03:08
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something smells fishy:
tuna salad submarine
washes up on beach


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post Jul 1 14, 14:17
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washing on the beach
exposed the unflattering,
it's unsuitable


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