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Apr 9 14, 12:02
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loss of a lifetime: refusal to be revived if I'm really dead
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Apr 9 14, 23:15
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am I really dead or in a comatose state for the next lifetime
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Apr 10 14, 09:40
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a long-necked lifetime is common for a giraffe... or your cute honey?
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Apr 11 14, 17:00
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your acute honey is very sharp to the taste so are bee's stingers
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Apr 14 14, 19:49
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some be's stingers and some be's not; set insect aside
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Apr 15 14, 23:14
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Daniel,
I've no answer for this one but if you add a title, it would be a nice Faux Ku!
Larry
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Apr 16 14, 13:05
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Okay, Larry.... how about "bee-lated" ?
bedside insect can give you the itch; it bares moving
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Apr 16 14, 23:42
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its bears are moving multiplying while they slept Yellowstone springtime
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Apr 17 14, 06:39
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yellowed stone spring runs down the furrow; old dog looks relieved
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Apr 21 14, 23:06
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relief for old dogs is a small hill to stand on he need one leg up
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Apr 22 14, 15:03
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given a leg up the arthritic runner shines; red toes in the sun
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Apr 23 14, 13:50
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red sons being towed, Indians in the sail set on the wrong schooner.
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May 23 14, 19:53
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schooner or later everyone gets it wrong; captain drinks in port
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May 27 14, 18:52
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the captain drinks port, while the crew has to drink grog to get their sea legs.
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May 28 14, 01:36
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to get to see legs the crew mans the stairway; things are looking up
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Jun 2 14, 13:00
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looking up at things you may have things looking back gravitating sight
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Jun 2 14, 23:47
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gravitating site: the magnetic draw of a polling place
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Jun 3 14, 23:21
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of polling places: sometimes you don't get to vote something smells fishy
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Jun 30 14, 03:08
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something smells fishy: tuna salad submarine washes up on beach
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Jul 1 14, 14:17
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washing on the beach exposed the unflattering, it's unsuitable
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