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Dec 4 13, 02:34
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youse may become crossed while in Philadelphia; beware the roundhouse
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Dec 4 13, 23:45
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beware roundhouses mainly those that don't leave tracks, those are all un-trained
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Dec 8 13, 20:02
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untrained with snowballs: when the football is slushed they freeze in their shoes
(Detroit Lions vs. victorious Philadelphia Eagles)
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Dec 10 13, 01:20
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The frieze one eschews is artificial moldings; millwrights use skill saws.
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Dec 18 13, 21:29
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saws abuse mill rights; trees bark at cutting across their life and limb lines
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Dec 20 13, 00:50
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their life is limned lines are autobiographies self-aggrandizement
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Dec 24 13, 14:01
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shell fish grandparents store up all their calcium; they're not just kidding
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Dec 26 13, 00:49
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their knot’s were skidding sliding over the wet dock the pier just let go
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Dec 26 13, 13:51
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their peers let go in a standing ovation... senryu cheers
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Dec 28 13, 01:05
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Senryus shear satire and ironic thoughts with a pairing knife
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Dec 28 13, 15:22
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a pairing knife divides your observations... two separate views
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Dec 31 13, 12:49
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two-step errant views skill comes with experience dance while touching both
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Mar 14 14, 11:10
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a dancing tooth brush leaves toe jam between the teeth; gums up the works
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Mar 21 14, 23:49
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The work tears gums up and it is a filling job; brazil nut taster
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Mar 22 14, 16:33
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Brazil news tester has to read Portuguese: nas entrelinhas
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Mar 31 14, 22:18
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nose into the lines where knowledge is imparted within paradigms
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Apr 1 14, 13:17
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without pair o' dimes candy machine will not work; must eschew the gum
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Apr 3 14, 21:51
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most eschew the glum sadness is a parasite sucking life from smiles
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Apr 4 14, 09:32
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suckling life smiles keeping abreast of the warmth; the infant milks it
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Apr 7 14, 23:25
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the instance makes it into the fond memories that last a lifetime
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