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Feb 4 13, 03:17
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you've been addicted? did you get carried away on a gurney?
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Feb 4 13, 14:25
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Iona journey took me outta New York, not Inner Hebrides
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Feb 5 13, 17:41
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in her herbicide she mixed in resistant seeds; new corn without weeds
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Feb 6 13, 10:42
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new scorn within weeks blame inanimate objects, man kills; not weapons
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Feb 6 13, 14:52
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minstrels use weapons of instrument and song; hearts for the winning
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Feb 6 13, 23:06
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hurts form the whining which rise from self destruction bruising the ego
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Feb 7 13, 11:41
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his ego burst he was impelled through the room: helium buffoon
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Feb 8 13, 01:01
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rely on balloons filled with water for a bed but trim your toenails
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Feb 8 13, 10:28
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trimming toenails tends to trip turtles; seashore shell shock
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Feb 10 13, 00:55
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she's sure a shell shocked but knows mullosks have no charge just some petty cache
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Feb 10 13, 21:51
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not a pretty crash: braking to a sudden fog then cacophony
which reminds me of last evening:
Saturday Night Live: Justin Bieber shows inept singing, acting skills
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Feb 11 13, 02:03
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the phony cocoa had been mixed with the wrong beans, grounds, not chocolate
loved your addendum! (add in dumb?)
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Feb 11 13, 05:03
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ground's not chocolate; when you're in hot water don't stir up the dirt
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Feb 11 13, 09:49
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don't stirrup the dirt when setting in the saddle, get a taller horse
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Feb 11 13, 10:44
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build taller houses for big tribes on small lots; concentrate forces
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Feb 11 13, 13:15
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farces consternate those who feel parodies should amuse, not confuse
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Feb 11 13, 14:44
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a muse may confuse the unsuspecting writer: sort through impressions
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Feb 12 13, 01:04
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short impressions threw dents on the dead-pan comic; dimples with a smile
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Feb 12 13, 05:46
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wimple with a smile; King James Mona Lisa after dental work
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Feb 12 13, 10:45
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occidental work is hard to find because of orient-ation
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