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Senryu, Japanese form: 5-7-5 or less |
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Apr 24 24, 07:34
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my drive helps dentist because I forget to brush; he fills in the gaps
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Apr 26 24, 09:59
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He felt in the grapes for seeds of sobriety; don’t ferment the juice.
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Apr 27 24, 03:15
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don't foment for Jews who will not come to your aid ask those in Gaza
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May 3 24, 10:21
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Those in Gaza asked their leaders, Hamas, for peace. The Jewry’s still out.
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May 4 24, 05:53
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the jury's still lout refused to give a pinion; could hear feather drop
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May 13 24, 09:38
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A feather drops near the tree with the eagle’s nest, fledglings are fed meat.
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May 13 24, 10:58
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fledglings meet a Fed; giving him an eagle eye they flee to their nest
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May 21 24, 08:36
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The fleas in their nest try to hide from the fledglings; they are just desserts
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May 22 24, 02:47
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got his just desserts after meal of pie, ice cream; threw up on his plate
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Jun 1 24, 10:28
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He threw up his plate and told everyone to duck; short on clay pigeons
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Jun 2 24, 14:59
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sort of clay pigeons the artist kiln-baked his doves something to coo at
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Jun 8 24, 08:46
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Something’s coo-coo at the big candy factory; it’s a real nut house.
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Jun 8 24, 10:36
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a surreal nut house: Planters catch fasciitis; owner called a heel
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Jun 15 24, 09:13
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Owner called to heal sick pets in mountain clinic; veteran aerie.
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Jun 15 24, 12:05
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veteran air head still wrestling with combat; needs understanding
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Jun 20 24, 09:13
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Standing under knees, baby elephants nursing; nature and nurture.
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Jun 21 24, 04:50
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nay to your nurture! how you distort everything that I pen in here!
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Jul 4 24, 07:58
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That we pen in here erases all common sense; inevitable!
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Jul 4 24, 12:13
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in Evitaville things just seem to happen can't get around it
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Jul 11 24, 08:29
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Kant got around it with logic and common sense. Sir, come navigate!
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