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				  Apr 24 24, 07:34 |  
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				my drive helps dentistbecause I forget to brush;
 he fills in the gaps
 
 
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				  Apr 26 24, 09:59 |  
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				He felt in the grapesfor seeds of sobriety;
 don’t ferment the juice.
 
 
 
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				  Apr 27 24, 03:15 |  
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				don't foment for Jewswho will not come to your aid
 ask those in Gaza
 
 
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				  May 3 24, 10:21 |  
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				Those in Gaza askedtheir leaders, Hamas, for peace.
 The Jewry’s still out.
 
 
 
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				  May 4 24, 05:53 |  
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				the jury's still loutrefused to give a pinion;
 could hear feather drop
 
 
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				  May 13 24, 09:38 |  
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				A feather drops nearthe tree with the eagle’s nest,
 fledglings are fed meat.
 
 
 
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				  May 13 24, 10:58 |  
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				fledglings meet a Fed;giving him an eagle eye
 they flee to their nest
 
 
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				  May 21 24, 08:36 |  
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				The fleas in their nesttry to hide from the fledglings;
 they are just desserts
 
 
 
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				  May 22 24, 02:47 |  
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				got his just dessertsafter meal of pie, ice cream;
 threw up on his plate
 
 
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				  Jun 1 24, 10:28 |  
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				He threw up his plateand told everyone to duck;
 short on clay pigeons
 
 
 
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				  Jun 2 24, 14:59 |  
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				sort of clay pigeonsthe artist kiln-baked his doves
 something to coo at
 
 
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				  Jun 8 24, 08:46 |  
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				Something’s coo-coo atthe big candy factory;
 it’s a real nut house.
 
 
 
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				  Jun 8 24, 10:36 |  
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				a surreal nut house:Planters catch fasciitis;
 owner called a heel
 
 
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				  Jun 15 24, 09:13 |  
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				Owner called to healsick pets in mountain clinic;
 veteran aerie.
 
 
 
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				  Jun 15 24, 12:05 |  
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				veteran air headstill wrestling with combat;
 needs understanding
 
 
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				  Jun 20 24, 09:13 |  
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				Standing under knees,baby elephants nursing;
 nature and nurture.
 
 
 
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				  Jun 21 24, 04:50 |  
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				nay to your nurture!how you distort everything
 that I pen in here!
 
 
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				  Jul 4 24, 07:58 |  
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				That we pen in hereerases all common sense;
 inevitable!
 
 
 
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				  Jul 4 24, 12:13 |  
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				in Evitavillethings just seem to happen
 can't get around it
 
 
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				  Jul 11 24, 08:29 |  
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				Kant got around itwith logic and common sense.
 Sir, come navigate!
 
 
 
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