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May 23 12, 00:47
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Once again Daniel, GENIUS !
to bet your hedges plant lots of prickly briar patch with wild roses
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May 23 12, 14:59
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wild Rosie has packed her stabs at fun were always a thorn in my side
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May 24 12, 15:32
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a throne on its side could be unsettling... who has the reigns?
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May 25 12, 00:06
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hoo-hahs in the rain dampen the controversy what 'er you to-do
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May 25 12, 01:27
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what hair, what hair-do fashion, fusion, or fake it so chopitallov
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May 25 12, 07:50
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sew chopped-up cloth to create a patch-work quilt -- winter warm-up
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May 25 12, 08:21
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a winter stitch-up balloon coat to keep you warm hope it don't blow off
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May 25 12, 08:30
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don't blow me off said the chip on his shoulder; I'm from the old block
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May 25 12, 08:42
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I foam the cold bock two heads are better than one thoughts leave when near beer
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May 25 12, 08:50
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thoughtless love from beer consumed among strangers; it gets still stranger
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May 25 12, 09:11
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It gets still stranger at Adams Family bash Morticia may lurch
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May 25 12, 09:40
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when mortician lurched his ire began to fester; addams' apple froze
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May 25 12, 22:15
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Adam's apple thoes come from a rib extraction while sleeping one eve
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May 26 12, 03:58
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while sleeping one eye remains alert to the world but mind remains closed
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May 26 12, 10:07
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mine's remains closed to further digs; ore no more
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May 26 12, 23:04
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aura is no more than the truie being itself longing for the dawn ...
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May 27 12, 07:51
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along for the dawn water precipitates; a morn of greening
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May 27 12, 14:25
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I mourn of greeting empty places in my mind filled with now dead friends
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May 28 12, 11:26
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field of dead men weeps for spent life; the stones cry out
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May 29 12, 23:13
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theist ones cry out there is a higher power and it is not I
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