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Senryu, Japanese form: 5-7-5 or less |
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Apr 11 18, 13:24
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honesty's snot won trying to keep your nose clean; easy to blow it
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Apr 12 18, 10:17
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easy to blow it unless you use dynamite; fishing’s a success
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Apr 14 18, 07:15
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fishing needs some cess; even most experienced don't get strike each time
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Apr 14 18, 10:14
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don’t get strikes each time but he will keep on bowling; no split decision
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Apr 14 18, 13:21
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split nose decision: he punched him right in the face for insulting her
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Apr 15 18, 19:45
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her foreign salting and her seasonings were strange; rubbed me the wrong way
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Apr 16 18, 09:41
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rubbed it the wrong way and out popped a lad inside; would not grant wishes
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Apr 16 18, 22:37
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wood knot grants wishes if you would like to get rich; carve some Meerschaum pipes
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Apr 17 18, 10:16
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carved pipes were mere sham; dreams for wealth from the auction had gone up in smoke
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Apr 18 18, 08:53
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head gone up in smoke because he inhaled too much; good start on coffin
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Apr 18 18, 15:03
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good start on coffin: hollowed out an old oak log for a Viking burn
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Apr 19 18, 08:57
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a Viking burns for sacking villages and towns; also, when he’s dead
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Apr 19 18, 12:34
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when dead in Oslo he was laid out in a boat; a life up in smoke
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Apr 20 18, 08:13
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smoke up in a life filled with nicotine and tar; hookahs filter them
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Apr 20 18, 19:00
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hookers filter them; the undesirable Johns left to their handler
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Apr 21 18, 22:11
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their handler left two standing on the street corner; he red-lights dis trick
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Apr 22 18, 01:46
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he read light district expecting diet food; his tongue was surprised
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Apr 22 18, 22:22
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he’s stung with surprise at a planned birthday party; presents weren’t present
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Apr 22 18, 23:21
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don't present presents; the birthday girl thinks they are a thing of the past
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Apr 23 18, 13:44
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a thing of the past always comes back to haunt you; guilty conclusion
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