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Senryu, Japanese form: 5-7-5 or less |
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Mar 31 18, 18:55
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used junk as garage: Sinic man sheltered his bike over the water
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Mar 31 18, 21:37
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the overt water covers sharks on Ireland's coast; you'll see Finnegan
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Apr 1 18, 01:48
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Finnegan's at sea dreaming, but easy to wake; passing boats just wave
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Apr 1 18, 18:35
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wave at passing boats with both hands when motor fails; get a tow or row
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Apr 1 18, 22:32
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wet your toe or row; more than one way across that piddling lake
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Apr 2 18, 21:03
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that piddling lake used to be nice to fish in; now it’s urine null
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Apr 2 18, 21:07
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urine all my dreams but you stayed in bed too long; you're a wet blanket
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Apr 3 18, 08:35
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Euro’s wet blanket was national currencies; worthless and worth less
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Apr 3 18, 12:54
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they wore less and less as summer's weather heated; then their leaves would fall
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Apr 3 18, 21:05
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then they leave the fall with a bruised hip and ego; pride goes with the pain
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Apr 4 18, 09:13
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pried open the pane missing the window frame; those are the breaks
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Apr 4 18, 22:18
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those are the breaks in a good basketball game; some are slow, some fast
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Apr 5 18, 03:15
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some are slow, some fast... at least until breakfast; then they become fast
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Apr 5 18, 18:20
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they fast then become shadows of their former selves; bones in baggy skin
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Apr 6 18, 02:44
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bones in doggy bag are brought home for Ginger; maybe to make soup?
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Apr 7 18, 21:14
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to make soup may be a simple task for some folks; ingredients ain’t
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Apr 9 18, 08:53
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ingredients ain't all that goes into good soup; you've gotta have love
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Apr 9 18, 22:39
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you’ve got to have love enough in your heart to give; at least, that’s my take
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Apr 10 18, 08:41
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you have give and take in the front end of your car? see a mechanic
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Apr 10 18, 21:24
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a mechanic sees some ways to make more money; honesty’s not one
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