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May 9 12, 08:20
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tiny toes are great in our new born - perfection the world keeps turning
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May 9 12, 08:27
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the wild keep turning themselves into vampires -- it's blood-curdling
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May 9 12, 16:03
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it's bloody curding she's cheddar skin without gloves and that's not gouda
probably better as a faux-ku titled Eat-um
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May 10 12, 16:53
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gouda is not cheese forcing smile for rubber ball regurgitating
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May 10 12, 17:44
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re gurgitation: please don't bring it up for disgustion
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May 11 12, 14:28
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ford escutcheon embellishes coat of arm-or around the driver
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May 11 12, 15:39
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a round - the driver then use niblick, putter if you wanna green
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May 14 12, 14:02
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you want agreein' select one who knows, not nos brown colors work best
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May 14 12, 23:34
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brown color works best because that is what you get mixing all others
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May 15 12, 09:20
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Mick sings and lathers with his barbarshop quartet -- close harmonic shaves
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May 16 12, 00:08
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Brilliant, Daniel !
harmony enslaves while disharmony entraps know your sharps and flats
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May 16 12, 04:35
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know that sharps cause flats; be careful about running over broken glass
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May 16 12, 07:19
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over broken glass such is the sound of my voice period of silence ...
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May 16 12, 09:07
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pier rids the silence ears fill with squawks and thunder gulls and oceans wave
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May 16 12, 10:15
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gulls and ocean greet shoobies to the shore... a splash from each
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May 17 12, 03:10
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a splash from each limb a very large belly-flop diverse expertise
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May 17 12, 06:36
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his verse expertise has yet to click in; many a clunker
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May 17 12, 08:51
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many a lunker leaps out of it's element fisherman's debate
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May 17 12, 16:30
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grand fishing debate re the one that got away did it reproduce ?
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May 17 12, 16:42
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fisherman debaits efficacy of drag lines; grievances redressed
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