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Apr 27 12, 00:28
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brief fabricates "truth" totally one-sided view the jury's still out
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Apr 27 12, 08:20
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the jury's still is drained of moonshine; they're still out... cold
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Apr 27 12, 09:04
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stills out in the cold make better shine that's high priced due to the coppers
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Apr 27 12, 09:38
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dew from the crappers spoiled the water table; stills unaffected
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Apr 27 12, 16:21
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still son affected by too much of a good thing moon shines but son's out
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Apr 27 12, 17:52
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moon finds sun rays reflecting on their warmth; man dreams beneath
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Apr 30 12, 02:51
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man dreams beneath his snuggle-tight warm duvet despite snores of wife ....
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Apr 30 12, 15:00
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despot wife snores through her husband's protests; congested air weighs
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Apr 30 12, 16:13
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congested air waves so full of propaganda Krauts starting a war ....
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May 1 12, 12:49
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kraut stirred in a wok fuse unsavory cultures far-east fascists
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May 1 12, 18:06
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furrier faces lawsuit for lion; no escape claws
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May 2 12, 09:01
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no escape, Claus chimney is Santa trap; fatten the goose
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May 2 12, 10:50
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frightening goose when Claus alit on poker; a royal flush
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May 4 12, 15:48
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auroral flash orbicular holed flight path soot and suit, sans sleigh
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May 7 12, 00:01
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suit and boot, sans tie you will get it in the neck forgetful, is all
Alan
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May 7 12, 07:49
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forgetful as Saul: you cannot remain the king without annointing
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May 7 12, 10:25
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Without an oinking piglets search for mother's milk from tail to pig's tie
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May 7 12, 10:31
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tale of the pig sty: drop in any time and you'll be eaten
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May 7 12, 10:43
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to be yule beaten plunge into a Swedish spa for steam and a bough
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May 7 12, 10:52
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a stream 'neath the bough where we fished away summer; our toes were bait
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