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Senryu, Japanese form: 5-7-5 or less |
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Nov 5 16, 11:49
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congraduations: greetings after you have faked your way through high school
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Nov 7 16, 04:51
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all through high school he was fishing boat's third mate: the master baiter
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Nov 7 16, 17:46
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Hey Daniel,
Thought I was the only one who doubled up on posts. Guess you got tired of waiting for a response.
For your first:
you weigh through high school to make sure you will stay fit; now, nothing seems to
and your second to continue the string:
the mass debater critiqued the priest’s homilies no phrase left unfazed
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Nov 12 16, 13:09
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no-felt left behind; right behind comfortable with the soft, smooth cloth
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Nov 13 16, 16:34
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smooth the soft cloth with a warm steam iron or you’ll wear wrinkles on wrinkles
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Nov 14 16, 14:18
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whizzing on wrinkles softens them for a moment; don't stay in them long
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Nov 15 16, 00:26
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don’t stay in too long or you’ll wind up getting stiff; or maybe be one
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Nov 16 16, 06:38
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if you become stiff get out of those soaking clothes... please do it inside
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Nov 17 16, 23:28
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its insides do please when chopped up in a gravy; if you have the guts
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Nov 18 16, 06:18
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if you halve the guts you will get pooped from the chore; better to toss 'em
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Nov 19 16, 00:30
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the bettor tossed them thinking he was on a roll; his dice turned to crap
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Nov 19 16, 11:19
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the mice turned to crap for everyday nourishment; their poop was refined
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Nov 20 16, 09:11
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refining their poop, farmers build large compost piles; some collect methane
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Nov 21 16, 05:30
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collect your methane to make electricity; greenhouse gas lesson
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Nov 21 16, 15:21
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greenhouse gas lessens destruction of atmosphere but not soon enough
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Nov 21 16, 23:58
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snot comes soon enough when you're keeping your nose clean; for sure, don't blow it!
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Nov 22 16, 18:06
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bellow it for sure as Euripides worked out; eureka with sweat
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Nov 23 16, 03:20
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you Ricketts are sweet say some of our neighbors; boy, they don't know us!
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Nov 23 16, 09:36
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you don’t know the boy if you think he has the mumps; he keeps tongue in cheek
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Nov 24 16, 03:25
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keeping tongue in cheek keeps it from being bitten; it likely should be!
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