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Senryu, Japanese form: 5-7-5 or less |
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Jun 17 16, 14:16
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observe justice shows; most should be deemed illegal someone raise the bar
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Jun 21 16, 01:49
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razing the bar showed what makes a bar tender: a bunch of termites
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Jun 22 16, 10:58
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termites in a bunch stick to the anteater’s tongue; sand helps digestion
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Jun 26 16, 14:32
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sand is ingested if you're caught in a riptide; listen to lifeguard
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Jun 27 16, 22:24
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to guard life, listen with ears unplugged from I-pods and eyes off I-pads
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Jun 28 16, 02:38
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ease off the padding in your formal poetry; be simple, direct
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Jun 29 16, 10:07
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direct and simple: common denominators for pallid and dull
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Jul 1 16, 05:51
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pallid and dull -- hallmarks for my poetry according to most
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Jul 3 16, 14:33
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moist accordion plays as well as when it’s dry; much like your humor
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Jul 12 16, 04:44
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my humerus ends where my funny bone hangs out; not wise cracking it
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Jul 12 16, 18:38
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it’s not a wisecrack saying the gluteus spreads making you half fast
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Jul 14 16, 02:49
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so you're half-fast at your colonoscopy? you're on his shit list
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Jul 14 16, 21:32
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ewer on shirt lists directions for stupid folks about which end pours
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Jul 20 16, 19:43
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a poor bout ends with pugilists learning to draw on a blank canvas
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Jul 26 16, 03:11
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if the canvas blinks you may have a concussion; don't just shake it off
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Jul 26 16, 16:21
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don’t shake off the dust when it’s too hot to shimmy use a cold chamois
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Jul 30 16, 10:55
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use a cold shoulder to shrug off unwanted guests; doesn't work for gnats
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Jul 31 16, 14:17
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working days for gnats deserve a round of applause; hands beget bug guts
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Aug 2 16, 04:48
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ham begets big guts; dangerous to chew the fat with a gourmand
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Aug 2 16, 23:21
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remand with a gourd to show he got a fair shake; his crime spree was squashed
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