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Senryu, Japanese form: 5-7-5 or less |
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May 25 16, 12:18
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never drink when stuffed it may stop the drunkenness or cause a real mess
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May 25 16, 17:34
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ore causes a mess as it separates from dross; that stuff will pollute
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May 26 16, 13:03
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polluters can stuff everything in the right place; please use your own can
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May 27 16, 05:34
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please use your own can for spitting out your foul chaw; spoils my diet Coke
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May 27 16, 14:57
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Coke spoils my diet which is anything I want; Root Beer floats are best
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May 28 16, 09:42
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root beer floats it best; ice cream rises to the top before dissolving
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May 29 16, 14:51
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dissolving before you have eaten the last bite; not enough ice-cream
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May 31 16, 09:01
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enough that I screamed when the root beer float blew up; did you have to laugh?!
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May 31 16, 11:43
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laugh when you have to but not when eating ice cream; stuff spews from nostrils
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May 31 16, 19:17
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root beer nostril spews are not a pleasant feeling; best spare the laughter
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Jun 2 16, 13:46
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laughter spares the best serious comediennes; stage fright comes with booze
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Jun 2 16, 21:48
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stage fights start with booze and culminate in more boos; chaos reigns between
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Jun 4 16, 07:35
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chaos between rains the hurricane makes landfall its bands play a dirge
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Jun 10 16, 06:29
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dirges have been banned from the local music hall; they're into salsa
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Jun 13 16, 14:24
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they're into salsa and other hot steps while they’re dipping on dance-floors
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Jun 14 16, 03:49
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dripping on the dance floor: Hispanics doing salsa with the air turned off
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Jun 14 16, 22:05
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with the hair trimmed off you couldn’t tell which was which, models are skinny
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Jun 15 16, 08:25
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models are skinny because they're afraid of weight; fat chance they'd get work
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Jun 15 16, 21:49
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they work to get fat calories make them famous sumo wrestlers
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Jun 16 16, 15:16
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sumo wrestlers fail when they are self-conscious; just observe; it shows
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