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Senryu, Japanese form: 5-7-5 or less |
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Nov 11 15, 22:18
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well produced a sprig of mint lodged in its mortar; will spread like wildfire
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Nov 12 15, 13:25
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will spreads like wildfire but can’t never gets started it sleeps next to won’t
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Nov 12 15, 16:57
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I won't sleep next to a person who snores loudly; it reflects on me
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Nov 12 15, 19:53
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reflecting on me is sun from a telescope he's a peeping tom
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Nov 12 15, 22:19
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he's a peeping tom: a baby who may grow large for our Thanksgiving
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Nov 13 15, 00:52
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for giving our thanks we leave relatives houses with some leftovers
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Nov 13 15, 09:55
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leftovers: have some to take home for making soup -- plus bones for your dog
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Nov 14 15, 23:43
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dogs get plus sized bones nothing from paltry poultry splinters mean vet bills
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Nov 16 15, 10:42
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vet bills are splintered when you boil the poultry bones; they nearly dissolve
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Nov 16 15, 19:24
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though nearly dissolved shelties don’t like poultry bones; ungulates wag tails
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Nov 18 15, 07:12
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unglued wags tell tales that are a bit disjointed; it's disconcerting
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Nov 19 15, 00:24
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consternation’s dish on the horns of dilemmas always walks on cloves
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Nov 19 15, 05:00
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a walk in the clouds suspends all reality; descent's a bummer
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Nov 19 15, 23:42
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most bums in descent could be homeless veterans in the wrong country
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Nov 20 15, 08:29
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wrong in the country; plop a pre-fab duplex next to a stream-bed
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Nov 22 15, 17:31
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next to the stream’s bed are the shiniest pebbles polishing takes time
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Nov 22 15, 21:10
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the Polish take time extremely seriously: *czas powa?nie
*"time seriously"
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Nov 24 15, 23:54
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Sorry Daniel,
My Polish is very rdzawy!
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Nov 25 15, 07:40
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your rust-red polish won't work on your blue sedan; it leaves ugly streaks
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Nov 26 15, 00:02
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ugly streaks on leaves are covered by frost’s paintbrush makes blues disappear
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