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Senryu, Japanese form: 5-7-5 or less |
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Aug 21 15, 18:53
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the night before Christmas and all through the house; two seasons away
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Aug 22 15, 22:38
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to season away the taste of wild gamey meat give it a milk bath
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Aug 23 15, 07:35
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given a milk bath my weary old skin softens; aches and pains remain
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Aug 23 15, 12:06
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remaining panes break as the ancient house falls down memory’s windows
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Aug 23 15, 18:06
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mammaries' windows: those hideous pop-up bras; please pull the curtains
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Aug 24 15, 21:20
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the curtain pulls please movie and theatre crowds kittens like to climb
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Aug 26 15, 12:59
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kittens like to climb but the Rangers forbid it; mountin' snow too deep
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Aug 26 15, 20:14
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mounting the deep snow rabbits can run easily wolves are too heavy
more Haiku than Senryu - sorry
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Aug 27 15, 03:59
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wharf was too heavy for the pilings in the bay; now part of the beach
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Aug 27 15, 17:17
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no part of the beach belongs on the new carpet wipe your sandy feet
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Aug 28 15, 06:33
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whip your sandy feet all over the beach blanket; it's great to lie on
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Aug 28 15, 14:03
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"to it’s" a great lie because you never get ‘round when flat on your back
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Aug 28 15, 20:10
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a flat on your back: while you're sleeping on your face upstairs room drops in
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Aug 29 15, 21:52
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rain drops in upstairs now you can watch waterfalls flooding the basement
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Aug 30 15, 19:29
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food in the basement is said to be uncanny; it's in the freezer
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Sep 1 15, 22:40
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in the fissure is some red hot boiling magma sealing the seething
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Sep 3 15, 05:29
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ceiling has seedling growing in years of filth; may grow through the roof
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Sep 3 15, 15:37
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though the roof may grow grasses and seeds the birds drop it helps by sealing
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Sep 4 15, 06:25
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sealing the roof helps prevent rotting of rafters; termites could follow
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Sep 4 15, 14:19
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wood termites follow when the new queen flies away nothing left to eat
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