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Senryu, Japanese form: 5-7-5 or less |
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Jul 23 15, 16:33
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adjusting my sights I fired at the targets; didn't help at all
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Jul 23 15, 21:47
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oil… it didn’t help rusted nut was tough as a furious ox hide
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Jul 24 15, 10:23
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furious ox hides so he can surprise his fare; fairness doesn't count
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Jul 24 15, 13:45
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fair niece doesn't count but her vocabulary shows cussin' cousins
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Jul 24 15, 14:18
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cussin' cousins show up for family reunion; video is blipped
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Jul 24 15, 21:40
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video of blips moving impossibly fast must be UFO's
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Jul 24 15, 22:49
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most bees UFOs Unfriendly Freak-Outs when stirred; never whack at them
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Jul 25 15, 13:10
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never whack a thumb when you are hammering nails you'll run out quickly
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Jul 25 15, 15:18
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I ran off quickly after I hammered my nails; got a manicure
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Jul 25 15, 21:15
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got a man to cure a couple of hams for me left with ill feelings
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Jul 26 15, 02:59
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left with ill feelings I saw a psychiatrist; he needed help more
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Jul 26 15, 08:57
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he hoped more kneading would not make the biscuits hard he was on a roll
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Jul 26 15, 12:02
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he is on a roll; the cannibals now gather for a pork-pull lunch
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Jul 26 15, 12:36
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the polls for pork launch politicians and virtue to wallow in mud
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Jul 26 15, 13:18
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swallows use the mud for convenient little nests; see Capistrano
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Jul 26 15, 16:04
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cup is drained to see the tea leaves at the bottom fortune is reading
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Jul 26 15, 20:08
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four turkeys leading a long line trudge up the hill; soon they all fly down
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Jul 26 15, 21:51
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all flies are down soon when men go to the bathroom good hands aim to please
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Jul 27 15, 01:50
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will you aim too, please? our walls and floors are pristine and they smell quite nice
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Jul 27 15, 12:28
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they smell quite nice and they’re cold and wet when healthy; a bloodhounds nose is
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