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Mar 12 17, 00:27
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not buffaloed
Hopi’s nose tightens when the white men talk of peace; he can smell a rat
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Mar 12 17, 23:01
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tail of two critters
he could smell a rat and major cat-ass-trophy; feline avoids trap
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Mar 13 17, 11:27
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food for thought
avoid free lion trips when you’re on a safari; pride comes with a fall
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Mar 14 17, 09:12
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tacks pried
pride comes before fall; humility amid summers rare at H&R
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Mar 14 17, 22:54
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wood files
rare at H&R; good tax preparers who aren’t chips off the old block
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Mar 15 17, 11:41
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dip in the past
chips off the old block: a bag of Herrs and notchyo's from his stomping ground
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Mar 16 17, 10:36
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oh lay him out
from stomping his ground the enraged bull wiped his hoofs; matador is caped
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Mar 16 17, 11:58
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along weigh down
matted door's escarped, 'Welcome'd for the hell of it; it's uphill from there
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Mar 17 17, 07:55
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picker up
it’s a pill from there that wakes you in the morning; helps the farmer see
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Mar 21 17, 11:41
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makin' hay
farmer recedes his grass field during harvest; plows pro seeds under
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Mar 23 17, 09:00
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tasty hammer
under plow’s proceeds we can feed a hungry world; swords are beat by food
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Mar 23 17, 10:39
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eating away beef
plow-sharing beats swords to settle disputed land; boarders flexible
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Mar 24 17, 21:14
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rubber wrong
flexible borders are like elastic pockets; economy’s stretched
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Mar 25 17, 07:21
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what the dickens!
commonly stretched on the tails of two sitters: best and worsted genes
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Mar 25 17, 09:24
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jean home
waisted jeans are best Reaching Naval Altitude; not Down Near Asses
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Mar 25 17, 12:38
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flat you lent
not near doneness the egg cracked a joke too soon; came out of his shell
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Mar 28 17, 13:04
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shell game
came out of his shell in his race against the hare; quick, sans carried place
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Mar 28 17, 13:52
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naked ex-cape
quick sands: harried place; rabbit tried so hard he lost... his fur coming out
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Mar 30 17, 08:16
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left alone
for his coming out one new priest was told, wear blue; you’ll get a garb bro
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Mar 30 17, 10:34
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Larry, that one totally lost me. Could you please explain?! (You know how dull I can be on occasion!)
knows in the air
no gritty gar beau; this old needlefish acted snooty with a bite
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