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Feb 8 17, 23:12
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dyno might
to find bass trying, fishermen used the wrong bait; try striking a match
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Feb 9 17, 16:34
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a toast to ignite
to strike a match punch a twin in the mouth; be sure bowl is spiked
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Feb 10 17, 11:29
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strike sparingly
if your ball is spiked bowling will become easy you’ll be a mace’n
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Feb 10 17, 16:49
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fruit-age
you'll be a May zing if you make juice in spring; squeeze to Florida
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Feb 12 17, 17:12
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rubber rite
squeegee the floor to make sure all the mass is gone from the baptism
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Feb 18 17, 07:21
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donot bet; hedge
your baptism rite in the river can't be wrong; dunk, dip, pour coffee
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Feb 19 17, 00:12
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eggs acting brew
drank poor dipped coffee straining grounds through my teeth; a campfire shell game
Egg shells dropped into campfire coffee make the grounds settle to the bottom
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Feb 22 17, 14:32
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miss placed loyalty
campfire shell game: young girls have shifty partners warming under where?
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Feb 24 17, 00:32
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bellow the belt
war ring under wears, toothless boxer’s fight was brief; he thang hith thawn thong
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Feb 24 17, 04:00
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political pants
his thing is a thong; makes him stand out in public leaning to the right
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Feb 25 17, 09:52
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greased palms
learning to doo right, children sit on the toilet; congress hands it out
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Feb 26 17, 06:19
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pullin' the waggin'
congress' hands are out for their favor-right projects; pay-back is the hitch
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Feb 28 17, 14:38
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check-in the male
the hitch was back pay when he shipped over in Nam; life and rounds were spent
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Mar 1 17, 11:19
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goaled ring
spent his time in rounds pugilating his partner; shadowed in circles
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Mar 2 17, 22:10
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beard did drag on
shadowy circle surrounds unshaven man’s face; passion was a myth
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Mar 3 17, 17:56
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where history lies
passing on the myth he would be lean on the truth; he'd re-lie on it
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Mar 5 17, 15:24
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a biding inn sect
he’d re-lie on nits because of lousey motels; being poor bugged him
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Mar 7 17, 12:56
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gift not for giving
built a bed-buggy from old mattress and wagon; past to new owner
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Mar 8 17, 09:14
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champ change
new owner to pass spending millions on his team; got a quarter back
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Mar 10 17, 11:40
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for bettor or worse
got a quarter back when you bet on the flip side? hope he's no tight end
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