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Jan 25 17, 20:46
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waits lift ‘er
a hardy ex cleans and jerks his checking account; bawl an sing zeroes
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Jan 26 17, 18:53
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below see level
ballin' stinged heroes who forgot to wear rubbers; they weighed in too deep
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Jan 27 17, 21:48
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private massage
they wait in two deep lines at the airport check-in; padding for patting
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Jan 28 17, 12:08
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cool summery
padding for paddling a large part of book-learning; keeping the heat off
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Jan 28 17, 21:24
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riff-raff riffs
keeping the heat off because they’re playing hot licks with stolen guitars
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Jan 29 17, 04:03
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smoking gun
they stole to get tar to pave their road to the grave; bought hot cigarettes
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Jan 29 17, 14:46
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habit you’ll…
boycott cigarettes and thirty-two ounce sodas; you’ll be grave-ly ill
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Jan 31 17, 15:13
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an even hope
it's grave for the ill unless you get bettor; he'd raise up the odds
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Feb 1 17, 08:38
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daylight savings clime
he’d add up the rays while he’s arresting sunbeams; kept them in prisms
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Feb 1 17, 10:32
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prigs in the brigs
colored prismers very discriminating; brilliant old souljers
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Feb 1 17, 22:21
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depressing food
brilliant old solders see medics after their mess; an upper G I
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Feb 2 17, 05:06
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intestate vet
an upper GI: soldier who wouldn't take bunk from pipeline above
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Feb 2 17, 17:47
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treaty you good
from pipeline above oil seeps on burial grounds; greater betrayal
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Feb 3 17, 10:25
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yellowed greens
grater betrayal: big cheese rubbed the wrong way shredded his salad
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Feb 3 17, 16:01
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undress zing
salad shredded his gastrointestinal tract; ran in the out-house
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Feb 4 17, 06:03
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really; no shit!
run in the outhouse; it will get your feet wet for the big mud run
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Feb 5 17, 12:28
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affording deere
for the Bud mud run he thought kegs would attract her; big flap over case
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Feb 6 17, 07:09
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con tortion
flip-over case: a defector's valise that's reversible
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Feb 6 17, 18:21
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no wing of notes
revere Sybil who’s playing heavenly music; she’s best at etude
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Feb 7 17, 15:38
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they're a-Pauling
she's best at Hey Jude; her guitar's swarmed by beetles trying to find bass
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