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Dec 24 15, 15:20
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dicey operation
suck-cesspool launch services harbor sewage; hosts floating craps game
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Dec 26 15, 00:08
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surfin' so far eeeee
floating crabs host game waving at passing swimmers good fun in a pinch
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Dec 29 15, 08:19
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d' ring kit
good fun in the punch if it's not under your chin; it's a real knockout
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Dec 30 15, 13:49
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plane missed
a surreal knockout Ali in the Philippines, no connecting flight
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Dec 31 15, 10:10
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bare facts ruffle feathers
not nekkid in flight: rule for Canadian geese who like long necks
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Jan 2 16, 23:37
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condense sated
those who like long-necks crane them when the beer runs low swallows take short drinks
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Jan 6 16, 03:19
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no vacating south
drinking with swallows? it's not a thing to spit at in Capistrano
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Jan 6 16, 18:11
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in the pink
in cap is Drain-o for the toilet that is clogged I’m now flushed with pride.
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Jan 7 16, 09:34
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stuff on your mind
so you're flushed, with pride of puppies one at a time; now your brain is clogged
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Jan 8 16, 22:24
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low bottom me
brains that are now clogged may cause writer’s block in vowels and colon misuse.
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Jan 10 16, 13:32
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cancer gave men a pause
her colon misused ended in semi-colon; no more period
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Jan 14 16, 23:40
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impatient paws
no more periods so don’t tap your ring finger he lips when you do.
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Jan 15 16, 02:05
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mountin' do
he slips on the dews but his do-not's are massive; kneed a coffee-soak
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Jan 17 16, 22:51
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with sure grrrr
coffee soaks his knees lapping the small pot holes, it hurt a lot, eh?
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Feb 1 16, 01:49
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coffee track and field
he hurtled latte; it had made him feel jumpy but tossed it in stride
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Feb 2 16, 00:40
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heavy medal
he’s tried to toss it but he put down his shot put could not steel the gold
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Feb 2 16, 07:33
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a value lessen
when gold has been stealed you could say that it's been forged; others won't steel it
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Feb 3 16, 00:36
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buried treasure
still others want it, don’t meddle with an iron safe; back-hoes in back-yards
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Jul 20 16, 19:53
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nozzle idea
hose in the back yard is too short to reach the front; squirt over the house
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Jul 26 16, 02:50
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ur in ur out
squirt beside the house letting it all hang out; little boy swollen
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