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JustDaniel
post Aug 28 15, 08:17
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his back was titer

the knot's number where
it's spiked with an aesthesia;
now counted senseless


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Larry
post Aug 28 15, 13:59
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a bout over?

now counted senseless
by friends and the referee
box… ring… wedding soon


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post Aug 28 15, 18:10
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a queery

boxers, ring - wedding?
pugilists in briefs propose
canvassing with hug


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Larry
post Aug 29 15, 21:56
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rough passage

hugging the canvas
sailors get sick on the mast
the ship’s still heaving


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JustDaniel
post Aug 31 15, 02:42
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surprise out-come

the chimp's still heaving
yesterday's breakfast biscuits;
threw us a curveball


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post Sep 1 15, 22:37
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bad mitten bird

throwing a curveball
can make the batter angry
when hitting a fowl


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post Sep 3 15, 03:13
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battered in the field

when hitting a fowl
hope that you don't get caught;
better to run home


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post Sep 3 15, 15:41
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shell games

home runs to batters
are blessings when stomachs have
sunflower seed trots


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post Sep 4 15, 07:17
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outhouse gas

sunflower seed trots
across the field to dugout;
wind was blowing hard


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post Sep 4 15, 14:15
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one lump or two

was blowing wind hard
or is that an accident
gas is not solid


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post Sep 4 15, 23:54
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What-the-H-too-Old!

gas became liquid
when he bent into the wind;
solids when he froze


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post Sep 5 15, 14:36
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fire and dice

he's frozen solid
in the cryogenic tank
not a chance in hell


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post Sep 6 15, 03:39
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life in sleepless holler

knotty chants in hell:
cannot remember slip-not;
everything's down-hill


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post Sep 6 15, 10:18
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bowlegged skiing

everest down-hill
makes adrenalin rush more
must have large snow balls


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post Sep 6 15, 15:20
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failed on round table

has musty old balls
that can barely even role;
sacked from job last knight


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post Sep 6 15, 21:28
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still stealing

last night job with sack
she went to investment school
burglar turned broker


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post Sep 7 15, 04:55
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loud finish

bugler gave broker
blow job at funeral;
horny veteran


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post Sep 7 15, 18:27
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salad daze

vegetarian
had no children of her own
she’s not appealing


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When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
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post Sep 8 15, 05:44
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stripped-down sex

she's not a-peelin';
he felt forced to lie about -
how he's satisfied!


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post Sep 8 15, 15:46
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diamond hacked rattler

he sat his filed hoe
by the stone and headless snake
it sharpened the blow


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