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faux-ku, titled haiku/senryu w/word play [ Daniel's 'creation' ] |
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Aug 28 15, 08:17
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his back was titer
the knot's number where it's spiked with an aesthesia; now counted senseless
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Aug 28 15, 13:59
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a bout over?
now counted senseless by friends and the referee box… ring… wedding soon
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Aug 28 15, 18:10
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a queery
boxers, ring - wedding? pugilists in briefs propose canvassing with hug
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Aug 29 15, 21:56
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rough passage
hugging the canvas sailors get sick on the mast the ship’s still heaving
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Aug 31 15, 02:42
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surprise out-come
the chimp's still heaving yesterday's breakfast biscuits; threw us a curveball
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Sep 1 15, 22:37
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bad mitten bird
throwing a curveball can make the batter angry when hitting a fowl
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Sep 3 15, 03:13
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battered in the field
when hitting a fowl hope that you don't get caught; better to run home
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Sep 3 15, 15:41
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shell games
home runs to batters are blessings when stomachs have sunflower seed trots
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Sep 4 15, 07:17
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outhouse gas
sunflower seed trots across the field to dugout; wind was blowing hard
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Sep 4 15, 14:15
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one lump or two
was blowing wind hard or is that an accident gas is not solid
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Sep 4 15, 23:54
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What-the-H-too-Old!
gas became liquid when he bent into the wind; solids when he froze
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Sep 5 15, 14:36
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fire and dice
he's frozen solid in the cryogenic tank not a chance in hell
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Sep 6 15, 03:39
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life in sleepless holler
knotty chants in hell: cannot remember slip-not; everything's down-hill
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Sep 6 15, 10:18
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bowlegged skiing
everest down-hill makes adrenalin rush more must have large snow balls
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Sep 6 15, 15:20
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failed on round table
has musty old balls that can barely even role; sacked from job last knight
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Sep 6 15, 21:28
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still stealing
last night job with sack she went to investment school burglar turned broker
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Sep 7 15, 04:55
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loud finish
bugler gave broker blow job at funeral; horny veteran
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Sep 7 15, 18:27
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salad daze
vegetarian had no children of her own she’s not appealing
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Sep 8 15, 05:44
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stripped-down sex
she's not a-peelin'; he felt forced to lie about - how he's satisfied!
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Sep 8 15, 15:46
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diamond hacked rattler
he sat his filed hoe by the stone and headless snake it sharpened the blow
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