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faux-ku, titled haiku/senryu w/word play [ Daniel's 'creation' ] |
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Aug 17 15, 23:21
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a guarded life
rippled bawdy hide bakes in waves at the seashore; he's tide to no one
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Aug 18 15, 14:54
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no hands - some cab
no one hitched a ride with the circus sideshow freak he was just all thumbs
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Aug 18 15, 17:57
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digital wind-up
he is all thumbs down so no one can pick him up; directions on hand
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Aug 18 15, 23:12
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salient salute
one hand directions instruct you in lots of things one finger doesn’t
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Aug 19 15, 17:16
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where to ship it?
a finger that's licked is oft leery of the ring; finger-boxing groom
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Aug 19 15, 22:06
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just desserts
fingers from boxes could be sponge cake called Lady’s or from thieving hands
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Aug 20 15, 01:03
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short-armed
former thieving hands unable to make cut-off; they both came up short
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Aug 20 15, 15:50
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rub a dub tub
their bath came up short when the old pump stopped working water we to do?
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Aug 20 15, 22:49
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Ill-Concerned
watered and poo-pooed before waiter checked on us; said that I looked flushed
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Aug 21 15, 12:20
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un-fin-ished
looking flushed and sad the goldfish righted itself short backstroke lesson
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Aug 22 15, 05:09
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ovenly package
short backstroke loosens mussels given a rubdown; turnover rises
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Aug 22 15, 22:35
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bypass paste… re:
rising turnovers look good but aren’t healthy; we, a gluten ate
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Aug 23 15, 08:02
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flushed with nonscents
wee, a glutton ate though he was full of poop; he joined a movement
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Aug 23 15, 12:03
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when some parade
his movement was joined by some procrastinators, they meet whenever
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Aug 23 15, 15:42
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sheepish encounter
they met when never a lamb had ever been herd; ewe can't believe it
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Aug 24 15, 21:22
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nutty conception
can’t relive its youth oak trees from little acorns I wooden try it
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Aug 26 15, 13:37
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dry eye in the house
wooden-eye try it if I could only sea it; I need wrist aces
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Aug 26 15, 18:19
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long sleeve suite
wrist aces are nice but you might get an arm broke or just lose your shirt
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Aug 27 15, 01:48
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dicey ending
Jesus lost his shirt gamboling with disciples; soldiers cast the die
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Aug 27 15, 17:23
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no lotto luck
soldier had to die but politician’s children are not numbered there
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