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post Nov 7 12, 15:15
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All dust an cobwebs everywhere
it's enough to make brave men despair
with echoes contrary
of critters quite scary; ghostface.gif
for creepers and crawlers - BEWARE

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post Nov 13 12, 11:22
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For all scrapers and scrawlers, BEWARE
when you enter our poetic lair,
be it prose or free verse;
we'll critique... kind but terse
all the thoughts you are wanting to share.



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post Nov 15 12, 02:21
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LAMENT

all those thoughts you are wanting to share
are futile, when there's nobody there
that happens when muse
has blown a main fuse
it's a fact that the cupboard is bare

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post Nov 16 12, 10:23
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That "the cupboard is bare's" not a fact
it is merely attendance we've lacked.
You and I have dropped in,
Dan and Wally have been
coming by. Our suitcases aren't packed.


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post Nov 22 12, 12:51
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If you've packed a suitcase, empty it
'cause we're mixin' here -- Yankee an' Brit
with an Aussie or two
a South African too
and some others with honor and spit!


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post Nov 24 12, 01:20
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If honour and grit are the key,
there's a Brit or a Boer or Yankee
sure to mix up a rhyme
sub-verse or sublime
a hotch-potch of smiles you'll agree.


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post Nov 24 12, 01:22
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Yes, poets are globally spread;
some living and some nearly dead.
I get the impression
in times of recession
that poems don't purchase our bread.


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post Nov 24 12, 02:42
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Poems don’t buy the bread that is true
a fact that the ancients well knew
so pen them for pleasure
in moments of leisure
though moments of leisure be few.


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post Nov 26 12, 16:38
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If those moments that leisurely flew
added up to a minute or two,
one with humor could pen
limericks for a grin
and continue this thread of word stew.


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post Dec 1 12, 09:03
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Please continue this thread; your words too
will be welcome... and we will greet you
with a morsel of wit
which somehow you'll fit
in a follow-up, spicing the stew.


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post Dec 3 12, 08:26
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Spicing stew with a follow-up word
might be what some consider absurd
but we, of lim'rick ilk,
think it's just mother's milk;
keeping brains from becoming gray curd.


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post Dec 3 12, 12:04
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And for brains in which it has occurred
already, at least it is stirred
to keep it from rot;
we flavor the pot
of mots... and our death is deferred.


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post Dec 3 12, 13:37
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Though our death is deferred with a mot
which we feel is quiet bon, maybe not
everyone will agree
with our brief levity
but we'll smile as we lie in our plot.


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post Dec 4 12, 03:46
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OoooH! thats ghastly! tombstone.gif
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post Dec 4 12, 05:34
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We will smile as we grub in our plot
though we do know we care not one jot
for the ramblings of fools
as we put down our tools
and off home - for our tea - we will trot.

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post Dec 4 12, 15:46
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Trotting home for our afternoon tea,
we stop by the scone shop. Two or three
tasty bisquits will quell
grumblings which now dwell
in my stomach. It growls peckishly.


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post Dec 7 12, 15:30
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If your stomach is peckish perhaps
those chickens and doves are your chaps
while walking the yard.
I'd find it quite hard
to bend down and peck... else I'd lapse!


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post Dec 8 12, 01:23
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Picking cold chicken perhaps
cold turkey and other nice scraps
as I laze in the shade
of my summer brocade
with a glass of crushed ice and good schnapps


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post Dec 9 12, 17:29
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South African springtime is nice
while we're drinking eggnog with spice
as Christmas draws near
an' snow-shov'lin' gear
is readied... and salt bags for ice.



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post Dec 10 12, 12:08
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He's red-eyed and assaults bags of rice
for the fields are all covered with ice
where he once went to eat
now he has to compete
with a cat who is not very nice


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