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Nov 7 12, 15:15
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All dust an cobwebs everywhere it's enough to make brave men despair with echoes contrary of critters quite scary; for creepers and crawlers - BEWARE
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Nov 13 12, 11:22
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For all scrapers and scrawlers, BEWARE when you enter our poetic lair, be it prose or free verse; we'll critique... kind but terse all the thoughts you are wanting to share.
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Nov 15 12, 02:21
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all those thoughts you are wanting to share are futile, when there's nobody there that happens when muse has blown a main fuse it's a fact that the cupboard is bare
Alan
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Nov 16 12, 10:23
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That "the cupboard is bare's" not a fact it is merely attendance we've lacked. You and I have dropped in, Dan and Wally have been coming by. Our suitcases aren't packed.
YET!!!
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Nov 22 12, 12:51
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If you've packed a suitcase, empty it 'cause we're mixin' here -- Yankee an' Brit with an Aussie or two a South African too and some others with honor and spit!
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Nov 24 12, 01:20
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If honour and grit are the key, there's a Brit or a Boer or Yankee sure to mix up a rhyme sub-verse or sublime a hotch-potch of smiles you'll agree.
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Nov 24 12, 01:22
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Yes, poets are globally spread; some living and some nearly dead. I get the impression in times of recession that poems don't purchase our bread.
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Nov 24 12, 02:42
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Poems don’t buy the bread that is true a fact that the ancients well knew so pen them for pleasure in moments of leisure though moments of leisure be few.
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Nov 26 12, 16:38
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If those moments that leisurely flew added up to a minute or two, one with humor could pen limericks for a grin and continue this thread of word stew.
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Dec 1 12, 09:03
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Please continue this thread; your words too will be welcome... and we will greet you with a morsel of wit which somehow you'll fit in a follow-up, spicing the stew.
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Dec 3 12, 08:26
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Spicing stew with a follow-up word might be what some consider absurd but we, of lim'rick ilk, think it's just mother's milk; keeping brains from becoming gray curd.
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Dec 3 12, 12:04
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And for brains in which it has occurred already, at least it is stirred to keep it from rot; we flavor the pot of mots... and our death is deferred.
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Dec 3 12, 13:37
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Though our death is deferred with a mot which we feel is quiet bon, maybe not everyone will agree with our brief levity but we'll smile as we lie in our plot.
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Dec 4 12, 03:46
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OoooH! thats ghastly!
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Dec 4 12, 05:34
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We will smile as we grub in our plot though we do know we care not one jot for the ramblings of fools as we put down our tools and off home - for our tea - we will trot.
Alan
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Dec 4 12, 15:46
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Trotting home for our afternoon tea, we stop by the scone shop. Two or three tasty bisquits will quell grumblings which now dwell in my stomach. It growls peckishly.
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Dec 7 12, 15:30
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If your stomach is peckish perhaps those chickens and doves are your chaps while walking the yard. I'd find it quite hard to bend down and peck... else I'd lapse!
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Dec 8 12, 01:23
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Picking cold chicken perhaps cold turkey and other nice scraps as I laze in the shade of my summer brocade with a glass of crushed ice and good schnapps
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Dec 9 12, 17:29
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South African springtime is nice while we're drinking eggnog with spice as Christmas draws near an' snow-shov'lin' gear is readied... and salt bags for ice.
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Dec 10 12, 12:08
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He's red-eyed and assaults bags of rice for the fields are all covered with ice where he once went to eat now he has to compete with a cat who is not very nice
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