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Alan
post Mar 11 12, 02:36
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KEEP POLITICS OUT OF POETRY !

The senator who's too old to run
is missing far too much of the fun
he must be Dem-o-crat
not knowing where it's at
for helping himself to all that mon-

Alan


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post Mar 11 12, 02:39
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In compote, I am too old to run,
but it never was really much fun.
Yet I eat it sometimes,
but it won't ring my chimes...
though with whipped cream it can't be outdone.


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post Mar 11 12, 02:46
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Oops! Alan himself just wrote one
while I watched SNL! I'm undone!
So I'll try it again
ere he gets out his pen...
but I'm sure he'll still hit a home run.


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Alan
post Mar 11 12, 05:29
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"I am sure he will hit a home run"
whatever that is - I am undone
being rather frugal
I checked it on google
oh boy, this is what you guys call fun ?

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post Mar 11 12, 06:31
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To a boy, baseball's what he calls fun
in the US in summer; the sun
has a pleasant effect
as his playmates connect
with the kid when he hits a home run.

"Hit a home run" can be metaphor
for accomplishing something -- outscore
your opponent, or play
higher hand, or some way
do outstandingly well. It ain't war!


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post Mar 11 12, 08:34
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Do outstandingly well in a war
and then soon enough, you get what-for
you'd think winning is wrong
lefties banging their gong
for without us, they would be no more ....

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post Mar 11 12, 08:55
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To be outstanding in certain fields
it takes luck or some specialized skills.
To succeed where most fail
is like war. To excell,
you accept what your effort reveals.


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Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers.
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post Mar 11 12, 13:13
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All except what our effort reveals
may be grace that our bias conceals;
there's so much that we do
that's beyond me and you
we can't see it 'til blinders He peals.


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post Mar 11 12, 17:16
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BLINDER

We can't see when onions are pealed
through tears' blur so little is revealed
you would think that today
GM farmers would say
here's an onion with magnetic field

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post Mar 12 12, 00:19
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Onions having a magnetic field
may spin out of control when they're peeled.
We must chop them real fine
'till their atoms align
when they're sauteed, stir-fried or they're grilled.


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post Mar 12 12, 01:45
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NOSE-IN-THE-AIR COOKING AROMAS

You eat sauteed, stir-fried, or they're grilled
whatever, you will be highly billed
to such high class bistro
you shoudn't ever go
best pretend that to tip you are thrilled

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post Mar 12 12, 09:25
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I eat grilled, sauteed, blackened and broiled;
not in bistros or cafes. I'm spoiled
by my wife, if you please,
who has HomeEc degrees
in food science, et al, she employed.


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post Mar 12 12, 10:38
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no food science, but still she's employed
cooking food for our gang, that's deployed
out in various places
in jeans and in laces;
but home-links are hardly destroyed!


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post Mar 12 12, 23:58
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My home life, when quiet young, was destroyed
as my father to war was deployed
for the Korean war.
Life in that abattoir
stained his soul and left his mind a void.


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post Mar 13 12, 11:54
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Grandchild #6; Grandson #5

Well, today my mind's also a blur
but I'm now wide awake, that's for sure.
4:15 arrived Reese;
daughter's pains now have ceased.
All is well, as my wife will concur.


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post Mar 13 12, 12:04
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DOMESTIC BLISS

All's not well, as most wives will concur,
hubbs are remiss, as dish washer, chauffeur
and in all other ways
except drinking and brays
we hubbs take thise slur, without demur

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post Mar 14 12, 08:10
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Don't project all your stuff upon me
or I'll turn you right over my knee;
just because you don't help
doesn't make me a whelp;
I participate well; that's the key.


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post Mar 14 12, 14:37
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If men knew all the trouble they cause
when the wife asks for help, there's the pause
just before he replies
with excuses and lies
then wakes up needing bandage and gauze.


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Alan
post Mar 15 12, 03:29
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ALTERNATIVE VIEWPOINT

Oh to look out to sea, and to gaze
at horizon, enough of it to phase
an agrophobic -
enough to make him sick
from beginning to end of his days

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post Mar 16 12, 13:53
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my dad

from beginning to end of his days
he affected me in so many ways
for he had no pretense,
just total absence
and a rather neat turn of fine phrase

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