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Apr 6 17, 23:30
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you’ll vary nature, man
you can open up a used and abuse car lot, letting some idiots help you lease or try to sell off every old car very cheaply so I would like a chance on one item; reserve me a Yukon
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Apr 7 17, 15:28
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reserve me an auto that goes easy on gas and doesn't use a lot of oil and one that's been regularly maintained and isn't driven in the mud or out on gravel roads and still drives in reverse
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Apr 10 17, 18:23
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still drives alloy nails and winds up bending them when you’re using a good hammer to put together anything of wood so you have to take bent ones out which will weaken the joints so remember, steel drives
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Apr 10 17, 20:58
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member of the boys club joined in every team sport and arose to the top in each being elected captain of the teams; seems he was always out to prove either that he was best or had largest member
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Apr 13 17, 13:25
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lions maul testicles
largest is no measure of the kinds of creatures nature put on the world that eat since there are some on the Serengeti meaner than others or more toxic and even small ones kill unless shown some largess
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Apr 13 17, 15:22
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shown some testicle meat a lion with a mane can become pretty excited; they've been know to charge on your credit card if you keep it in your pocket so best not to banty your manhood with some shown
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Apr 17 17, 14:04
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making him - destroyed
manhood: adults that have kindness for all the souls inside of each child and parent, not a self-indulgent pleasure seeker giving nothing back to those who helped you grow and ask why in the world the man’s hood
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Apr 17 17, 16:23
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the whirled prop on his cap fit childish character of the kid at the Trump protest who called a Vet anti-American; needs a paddle from his papa and some lessons on what's going on in the world
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Apr 19 17, 22:41
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going on a long trip requires a lot of time if you have to drive to get there what with traffic congestion and bad roads so instead of all that hassle buy tickets in advance and then you can go wing
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Apr 20 17, 04:59
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you can go on a long vacation traveling all across the United States but you could take a trip to Canada inspired by old Sergeant Preston and his faithful dog King by visiting Yukon
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Apr 22 17, 21:17
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vacations tempted me
visit another place, camping with not much room and a hole in the ground to poop taking cold baths in a lake full of trout is no longer something I like; old guys like comfort and need a nice calm sit vie
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Apr 24 17, 01:56
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sit vie? are you vying to find a place to sit? or do you mean sitz I'm leben? or do you mean simply your vie sitting? that wouldn't be much of a life playing musical chairs: (German accent) ve schit
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Apr 26 17, 22:21
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Hi Daniel, I couldn't decide so I did one on both sets of words. garnering no closure
German and some lingo remains academic; not being intellectual, erudition about language is so rare that limited encounters impress me so when you nudge me, you’re near germane.
assist is a testament
accent seemed to belie strange word connotations indicative of the content summarized in the critique arena, tending to analyze the term instead of just someone sitting down on assent
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Apr 27 17, 03:46
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sit down when you're near me to save me from walking which of late is very painful; if you have some paper we could compose ourselves around some poetry; important thing's to share despite what we set down
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Apr 28 17, 23:33
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despite what we two write there are none to join us in our endeavors to maintain some semblance of activity in here and though we post our work daily I feel our problem is overcoming the spite
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Apr 30 17, 06:15
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over the top of us nothing seems to happen except a here and then flutter without the sighting of a butterfly that lights gently for a display flitting round the garden 'til discussion's over
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May 1 17, 21:05
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discuss your sportsmanship and the prowess displayed with your coaches when in college and let them pick where you will help the team to win many championships and make your school famous just throwing the discus
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May 10 17, 19:04
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throwing nothing but UP characterized college sports participation for me; our school was too small to field many teams and I was merely the fastest but surely not the best; playing me's game- throwing
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May 13 17, 18:58
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picking up some parts
play games if you’re in to cracking heads for the team, kicking pucks around real hard ice in large cold places where the skates are sharp, new teams in a new arena, gang-fights and a new scar, until then, just ply gums
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Jun 4 17, 08:20
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just then the door opened and a masked man entered followed by his kemosahbee and a gigantic white horse named Silver; you said, Get that horse out of here! so Tonto took him out; he was being just, then
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