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Feb 17 17, 13:32
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a quest is a search for… answers quite often are used as criteria explaining how all axioms are clear, supplanting known facts for simple logic; this leaves no room for those who reach incongruity’s steep cliff seeking truths to answer
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Feb 18 17, 07:09
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seeking clever acrostics seems to be your forte; wish I had the inclination to join you in what's often been great fun but I've been distracted by pain; hope yesterday's spinal gives help I've been seeking
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Feb 19 17, 00:14
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gives help when it’s needed without thought of reward because he likes his fellow man and is kind of fond of fellow women as long as they are not fellows or had operations when some surgeon gives help
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Feb 19 17, 13:41
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surgeon may offer hope to a person who's down and needing relief from his pain; some surgeries are almost commonplace while others are beyond the scope as when strange sex hormones suddenly start surgin'
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Feb 20 17, 09:22
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sudden morning movement before my first coffee reminds me that I’m getting old and must greet each day at a slower pace especially when work is planned; today, it’s the back yard where grass died to sod in
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Feb 20 17, 12:06
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grass died in neighbor's lawn so he did some research to discover some simple way to try to keep his lawn green all year round; after winter's contemplation he decided to keep old sod with its grass dyed
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Feb 21 17, 10:26
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old sod, aeriated with some nice top dressing and a lot of fertilizer may still become a nice lawn for your yard and if it doesn’t, compost it till the seeds germinate and save lots of money
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Feb 22 17, 13:55
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money is nice to have but it sure isn't grass and also isn't filled with roots; it certainly doesn't sound like old sod so I'm wondering whether dirt is now lodged in your ear; doc removes... for money
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Feb 24 17, 00:35
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rye seed as sprouts is…
removes young seeds for crop, escaping composter, so you will have them growing to exchange with the dead sod and it helps you ease the expense when some squares rot; develop new grasses and save. Do I see moves?
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Feb 24 17, 03:35
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Do I see grass moving while it grows in seed beds? To be truthful, I haven't looked. I prefer to let it do its own thing knowing that it will become green; friends will take and plant it where morns make it dewy
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Feb 25 17, 09:53
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mourns make and the model of the first car I owned which was a big block Chevrolet made in fifty-five but it wasn’t stock; with Holly carbs and Hurst shifter it would do ninety-five in seconds on make's morn
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Feb 26 17, 06:02
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Seconds describes the cars that I started out with. My first was a Renault Dauphine that I bought at twenty-one in college. Then Eileen taught me how to drive; we took Florida's test. I was first, she second.
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Feb 28 17, 14:39
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I was ready to go to the annual fair in my small Nebraska home town where there’s lots of rides and plenty to eat but decided not to go there because it was small and not as big as Iowa’s
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Feb 28 17, 16:27
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biggest little state fair in September each year is what we all looked forward to: Western Washington State Fair, Puyallup where daffodils fill the valley months later in the spring; wooden coaster's biggest
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Mar 2 17, 22:14
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wooden roller coasters used to be the big thing at state fairs and amusement parks but with so many people getting hurt due to bad maintenance or rot most of them are now gone; to ride them, I wouldn’t
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Mar 3 17, 17:03
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ride them about their drums telling them to practice but only out in the garage; you love their bent to music but it's loud and you can only stand so much yet you must encourage because they have rhythm
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Mar 5 17, 15:30
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bystander escapades
because you cast no votes says you are myopic to protest results with your plea and cry foul when the president is Trump, not Hillary’s panacea. Democrats, now dethroned, ends that old bridge re-cross
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Mar 7 17, 12:15
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Old Bridge in East Jersey a New York bedroom town is part of Middlesex County, and it straddles the Raritan River where the Lenni Lenape camped; its old South River Bridge came to be called Old Bridge
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Mar 8 17, 09:18
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came to the conclusion that cajoling members you may find posting on Facebook is an exercise in futility because they never read your rant and most are city folks who never liked to come
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Mar 10 17, 06:41
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never write one of these without using the same word or sound with which you started to end the thought of your rictameter; this is the second time that you have done something that one should again do never!
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