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Real Name: Frances Kennedy
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Referred By:Eric Linden
Please note while critique is not requested, feel free. This is written in answer to Merlin's call. F
Dancing in the Rain Again
There’s always time for dancing in the rain and soirees lit by moonlight. You alone know better than the best to split champagne; a deux what two can do to monotone! I hasten to recall when Cupid hit and then, as now, I hardly stood a chance, except this time I recognize the fit is perfect for adventure and romance.
I’ve wandered lost out in the universe that beckoned for my answer to its call. Although I've fared, and well, it's but a curse what nomads such as us bear from a fall.
So weary knight, perhaps you too still miss our magic carpet rides through the abyss.
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Real Name: Frances Kennedy
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Merlin, it takes more than a run-of-the-mill rusty knight to beckon me from penning Spensers alone. Fran
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Real Name: Frances Kennedy
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Referred By:Eric Linden
To charm you so disarms me that I confess it's had a tad of fine-tooning too. All to say, whenever you're inspired to saddle up your steed I will follow where you lead. F
Group: Gold Member
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From: Lake Erie North Shore
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Real Name: Frances Kennedy
Writer of: Poetry
Referred By:Eric Linden
Thank you for looking in Ron and lovely to see you. It feels like old home week! I appreciate your notice of the matched end rhymes. It was a twist we threw into our volleys some time back for the fun of it. I trust we can look forward to a verse from you too. Frances
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Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr.
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Referred By:Lori
I joy at seeing Ron and Eric write again, so Fran, I thank you for your spark. With dancing such as yours our way to light, this site again will spin out from the dark!
deLighting again, Daniel
P.S. re requested crit, I believe your line #12 ought to read 'such as we' ?
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