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Sekhmet
post Mar 7 09, 05:35
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Assassins


Spring loosens moist earth,

letting the sharpened leaf spears

stab the infant Sun


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Guest_ohsteve_*
post Mar 20 09, 15:56
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Leo, I missed this, but I thought it very well done, loved the play on words ending.
Steve
 
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