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 Apr 3 09, 07:21
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 Babylonian  Posts: 64 Joined: 2-April 09 From: Beautiful Brooklyn NY Member No.: 773 Real Name: Michael Pollack Writer of: Poetry  |
again the circle's drawing near to full
frail shrunken withered being lying there within herself first felt the fetal pull as one we were till birthed in light and air and now my turn to feed the one who fed and now my turn to lift who first held me and now my turn to lead the one's who led as spiral time and life as needs-must be Michael in Brooklyn ·······  ·······anything which does not kill me makes me stronger
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Apr 4 09, 17:48
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 Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 1,250 Joined: 2-August 03 From: USA Member No.: 7 Writer of: Poetry |
Hello Mike,
Such a deeply passionate poem with so much emotion! Your words ring true as we reverse roles in life, especially as our dear parents age. I believe, as hard as it may be, that is what a good daughter or son does! Very touching and genuine. Thank you for sharing. Lindi ······· ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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mike in brooklyn Mother Apr 3 09, 07:21 
Cleo_Serapis Hello Michael in Brooklyn,
What a fascinating po... Apr 4 09, 08:43 mike in brooklyn Thanks Clio for the read and the response - much a... Apr 4 09, 12:03 ohsteve Mike, an interesting perspective of the cycle of l... Apr 4 09, 12:40 Eisa Hi Mike
This is a very moving read for me, bringi... Apr 4 09, 16:11 mike in brooklyn So nice to meet you Steve and Eira - and thanks mu... Apr 4 09, 17:02 
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