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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose  |
Hi Daniel,
 I think there is a gremlin loose here practising for Hallowe'en. I posted a reply to this and it has disappeared!   Anyway to reiterate;Do you know how hard it is to catch a katauta on the run??  I have been chasing this one around with my net but it just kept escaping through the holes, going round and around like a fairground duck!AH GOTCHA!!! Is it possible for critique to morph a piece... to new, broader perspective? to our Just Daniel 'morpher extraordinaire' - YES I'm mor phor a peaceful life! Love Grace 
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Oct 21 04, 07:46
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,596 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Perhaps yin and yang
cooperate in morphing? Doesn't exercise bring peace? ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Oct 22 04, 04:45
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Good morning Daniel
 This forces me into a comic reply again. How will I ever learn serious Katauta/Mondo? This is fun Daniel, but I would really like to write something lovely. Maybe next time?  Perhaps yin and yang cooperate in morphing? Doesn't exercise bring peace? Most assuredly, but today, must tai chi n up to prevent a yawn Wearily....zzzzzzz (I’m plum tuckered out, as you might say!!  )love Grace
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Oct 26 04, 09:10
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,596 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
tai chi n up indeed, Grace!
 I thought I'd responded to this with a laugh, but let me do it now!   Here is a solo mondo I wrote in court the other day. I hope it makes sense: accidental litigation what is his dispute? his car hit mine fair and square… in my front quarter panel a passing fancy, not a wink as I eased by; then I sensed his nose… and crunch chilled apprehension in court, unrepresented; why is it I feel guilty? business suit and robe befuddle civilian tongue; doubts at the point of in-fact en español break I await prosecutor; why should there be postponement? a legal tactic straw-grasping for a witness; hope I’ll give in, not show up meanwhile, my car waits; will it protest my return? will it creak at the outcome? after conferring I offer to plead the fifth; I shudder to tell my car © Daniel J Ricketts 17 Oct 2004 ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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