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 Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 3,446 Joined: 16-October 06 From: UK Member No.: 298 Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends  |
LIGHT’S OUT
It was a wrench, at eight bells, to part from the wench when she went to the powder room to powder her nose - what a delicious idea - was not, I suppose easy, in the deepest of gloom The light bulb - and life’s - quite transient nature which causes much strife is not shielded from death’s dreaded doom Fate’s caught you off guard altogether that night clearly marked is your card : “there is, sadly, no in at the womb ...” Alan McAlpine Douglas Challenge words : wrench eight powder nose delicious transient bulb shield card together ·······  ······· |
  
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Alan LIGHT'S OUT Aug 20 09, 02:27 
Peterpan Gee Alan, perhaps I am a bit confused here.
Can ... Aug 20 09, 07:36 Thoth Brilliant Alan, I loved it!
The very clever p... Aug 20 09, 15:19 Alan Dear Bev,
Thanks for the visit, and being brave e... Aug 20 09, 16:33 Alan Dear Wally,
Thank you, I'm always pleased to ... Aug 20 09, 16:34 JLY Alan,
This was a joy to read and the required chal... Aug 21 09, 05:56 ohsteve Alan, I keep hearing that last line in a bugs bunn... Aug 21 09, 12:52 Alan Dear John and Steve,
A smile a day keeps the blue... Aug 21 09, 16:04 ace Alan:
I should have replied to this one soone... Aug 22 09, 17:51 ace Alan:
I should have replied to this one soone... Aug 22 09, 17:53 
Alan Dear Ace,
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