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Feb 11 15, 06:41
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weight till you gain wait doctors will crucify you on a bed of pills
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Feb 15 15, 16:32
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in a bitters pail you can find a lot of pints but not your way home
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Feb 16 15, 18:23
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you've lost your way home and are twisting and turning every which way
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Feb 17 15, 15:32
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witch aviary is limited in colors familiar to crows
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Feb 18 15, 03:55
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familiar to crows is the dark witch's black cat but toads are quite yeuch
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Feb 19 15, 15:30
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yak buttocks are quiet because air escapes slowly through a fur muffler
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Feb 22 15, 04:02
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Brilliant !
through a fur muffler quietly for decency and what a surprise !
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Feb 25 15, 00:40
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white syrup rises maples will give their life's blood sweet nature on tap
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Feb 25 15, 13:36
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sweet nature on tap wasps overindulge apples typsy, but still sting
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Feb 27 15, 12:51
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typist can still sing during his composition; he won't decompose
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Feb 27 15, 12:53
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poets decompose as fast as anyone else leave one in hot sun
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Feb 27 15, 13:01
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leaf turned in hot sun fills the page with glowing light; hard on the pupils
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Feb 27 15, 13:35
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hard on the pupils but much worse on the master leaves school exhausted
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Feb 27 15, 13:55
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scholars exhausted in motor vehicle class; garage door was closed
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Feb 28 15, 12:52
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garage door was closed and his mind even more so car was not running
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Mar 2 15, 00:00
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car lot was running a sale on used vehicles; most of them didn’t
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Mar 2 15, 01:15
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most of them didn’t know what time of day it was and most did not care
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Mar 2 15, 04:13
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the mist does not care that it distorts your thinking; is it a real tear?
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Mar 2 15, 04:48
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is that a real tear in your baggy brown trousers best mend as soon as
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Mar 2 15, 09:43
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best minds will sooner or later demonstrate cracks; none lasts forever
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