H Mistral
You are a busy girl these days! I loved the intense woodland imagery (Oh roll on summer) and the earthy nature of the poem.
There are a small few nits with the metre, S1L3 the iambic rhthm fails.
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Listen closely, you may hear
the murmuring of trees;
it's in the whispering of their boughs Try "the creaking of their ancient bows"
disturbed by gently sighing breeze
The very last line has an extra syllable.
That is my R10s worth for today, so go well!
Hugs, Wally