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Aug 18 22, 08:03
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Absolutely eloquent, Larry! Don't know how you do it. Wish I could focus to try!
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Aug 20 22, 15:08
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Thank you Daniel. I know you can do single acrostics and the double is not that much more difficult.SOME DAY YOU SEE – SNAIL PROGRESS EYES’ AYES Steps of pain make for a end of “can I?” despite every fall, and with each hurtful stop you send up a silent prayer yearning for His help to overcome that leg. Using Him for strength to see eases eyes
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Aug 21 22, 07:40
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another astounding production, Larry. Wish I could respond in kind! sLightly out of focus, Daniel
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Sep 1 22, 23:34
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ACROSTIC MAGIC – TAKES SOME TIME POOR TRAIT PORTRAIT Art caused a reddish streak on modest face so that it now seems there are long cuts and scars in place through my cameo countenance and the harm makes one believe the artist’s brush cut; gashed so I, I am corpse
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Sep 5 22, 07:32
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NUGGETS OF GOLD – WON’T BE LOCATED INSANE IN SEINE New use to gather in gold and its dust escapes when I rub tailings through a steel sieve; searching for dregs that I feel others have dismissed so finds from the skeptic give the aura of hope that leaves me drained
No corpse as of yet. Nowadays, I feel like that until I get my ine fix in the morning; caffeine and nicotine. I have a tentative list of participants in the contest whom I feel are deserving of awards. As you said, we'll discuss that tomorrow. The difficulty in this contest still persists.
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Sep 5 22, 17:49
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What is interesting about your REMARKABLE "Nugget" is that it can serve as a metaphor for what we'll be doing over the next couple of days, discerning the GOLD, SILVER and BRONZE poems, plus the HM's! It will be a daunting task... and I hope you're doing the initial judging so we can discuss further. deLightingly, Daniel
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Sep 8 22, 11:31
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Daniel, how perspicacious of you to recognize the metaphor. Deciding on the awards was the impetus and inspiration for the Nugget. Straining them all through the proverbial sieve to find the gold was very difficult/impossible! Larry
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Sep 9 22, 18:46
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Well, we made it through, and I think everyone was reasonably satisfied... and I think folks appreciated the either 2500 or 2900 points! (Those who didn't get the 400 from the HM, I sent the full 2900, so everyone got the same).
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Sep 13 22, 00:10
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WRITE US A DREAM – EXPECT THE BEST
FORM FARM
Write rondeaux if folks help to see you have each verse poetic. Using descriptive thought so participants should get a vision shared by each dream that you may have. Reach out and grab eyes with awe. Art grows most!
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Sep 21 22, 23:29
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PERFECTION WAS – MERELY MY DREAM NOTHING ADDS UP Poem earns me rewards for fame at some time; enough for that thrill coming briefly my way that folks might like a new form. I thought that the word-play or shaped diamond nudged a writer with a dare and a sum.
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Jan 25 23, 23:03
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FAIRY RINGS ARE – NICE MUSHROOMS FOOD FOR THOUGHT Fan am I in this arc- rounded circle, yet I cannot claim rightful ownership. You insist that they could be yours. Nature provides so much good things that appear strange to us so add this to rich warm eats
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Jan 26 23, 16:06
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Unbelievable double acrostic again! Are you on mushrooms?!
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Feb 1 23, 21:27
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Daniel, thank you for your final question. It struck me as humorous and struck my muse to bring forth another double acrostic Nugget for your perusal. Enjoy! DOES A MUSHROOM – DOPE A TIM LEARY
PSILOCYBIN SCENARIO
Dread one who eats the top since it can take a stranger through a mind bending alternant universe. That is where I suspect they’ll have a dream holding them and will release or free one’s aura or fear. My!!!
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