I am a bit partial to writing poetry with a historical theme or a story to it and usually stick to Aboriginal tales but in this instance the story of the Cherokee stirred me to write.
Thank you kind folks for your suggestions most of which I have used to some degree here.
HER NAME WAS AMADAHY – FOREST WATER …. Revised Version
Maureen Clifford © The #ScribblyBark Poet
The last nine inch nail
was pounded home
into rough hewn pine.
White camas flowers
fresh picked
still holding the dew’s tear drop
were softly placed.
As dawn’s soft light
crept over the hills
he pushed the canoe out
into the silver water
starting its journey to the shadow land
where the water and pale sky merge.
In the ancient rite of the Chinook he pleaded
“Oh great spirit
whose voice I hear in the winds
welcome her without shame
for she is small and weak.
Kloshe kahkwa” (Amen)
HER NAME WAS AMADAHY – FOREST WATER
Maureen Clifford © The #ScribblyBark Poet
The last nine inch nail was pounded home
into the rough hewn pine and angle iron
as it rested across the thwarts.
.
He placed a spray of white camas flowers.
They were fresh picked this morning
and still pristine, with a dew drop tear.
As the silver water and pale sky merged - horizonless
he pushed the dinghy out into the ripples,
starting its journey to the shadow land.
Into the light it drifted,
in the ancient rite of the Chinook people
as he begged
“Oh great spirit
whose voice I hear in the winds
welcome her without shame
for she is small and weak.
Kloshe kahkwa” (Amen)