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Feb 7 24, 11:44
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scents in a sentence: a tirade with poor grammar and few correct words
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Feb 13 24, 19:59
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Correct a few words. The grammar police critiques; arrest and sentence
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Feb 14 24, 09:13
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a rest in sentence: function of semi-colon and briefly, comma
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Feb 15 24, 01:33
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Commas stop briefly and semi-colons longer; ellipse makes you think.
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Feb 15 24, 05:17
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a slip makes you think: "should I go out this morning?" heading back to den
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Feb 17 24, 12:37
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Heading to the den, hibernation begins soon; bears can’t bear the snow
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Feb 18 24, 12:32
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don't bear biers in snow lest you slip, and body falls bury them with haste
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Feb 22 24, 12:51
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Bury him with haste when you run over a skunk; use clothes-pin and spade.
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Feb 22 24, 17:20
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Clothes-spin was spayed to prevent her having pups no more ripped clothing
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Feb 27 24, 12:34
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Clothing ripened more when the washing machine broke; they’re now stand-alone.
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Feb 27 24, 14:34
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stand-alone britches leaning against back shed starched and frozen
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Mar 4 24, 11:39
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Swashed and frozen, Santa’s suit on the clothes line; Spring pause for Ms. Claus
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Mar 4 24, 15:12
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Mrs Claus springs paws foraging her reindeer fostered Rudolph
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Mar 8 24, 19:03
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A rude oaf fostered odd thoughts of gentility; may I or mayhem
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Mar 9 24, 09:59
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Māori mayhem New Zealand natives since canoe trip
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Mar 19 24, 09:22
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Canoe trip scents permeate the camping gear; an epoxy pox
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Mar 19 24, 10:16
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epoxy pocks all over the surface; damned stuff didn't stick
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Mar 29 24, 18:40
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Stuffed on a stick dam are limbs and twigs of all kinds, Beavers are weavers.
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Mar 30 24, 00:15
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beaver is weaver and partner's a cleaver cleaved his ear off!
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Apr 6 24, 11:15
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An ear was cleaved off in Gethsemane’s garden; His last miracle.
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