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Aug 17 17, 13:19
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wry toast
Marines halve the apples they've been provided
lifting them they proclaim: "To the Core"
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Aug 18 17, 07:58
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sweet suite
to the core said the worm couple
our new family needs room and bored
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Aug 18 17, 09:21
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what wood bee would be
sand bored through the wormholes
strange shaped driftwood piece now decorates my den's mantel
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Aug 19 17, 18:41
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loose stockings
maiden’s mantle is her apparent marital availability
old maids in dens are apparently unavailable
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Aug 19 17, 22:19
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who's your daddy?
one available to hang out in dens of wickedness?
what father wants that daughter?
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Aug 20 17, 22:18
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dearest related
daughter elates me and will refurbish area
except some nice tree covered land
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Aug 21 17, 10:25
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crippled giant
tree covered land with limb debris
high winds split double trunk toppling one side
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Aug 22 17, 09:39
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tongue in chink
toppling one side, excavating anteaters uncover lunch;
termite larva grow in birthing chambers opened
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Aug 22 17, 14:42
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tongue in chink
opened my mouth just wide enough to bite my tongue
eschew such a habit
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Aug 23 17, 11:40
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having a triumph
habit ascribes your various literati indicating you
need uniform guidance to stop a truth
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Aug 23 17, 13:30
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bitter truth
a truth becomes a lie in the mouth of a deceiver
facts are bait
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Aug 24 17, 15:16
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bite the tongues
bait is so tempting when exploring
that you have lots of trouble expressing desires
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Aug 24 17, 16:27
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eros errors
expressive desires reveal themselves unexpectedly in love
watch out what may happen turned loose
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Aug 25 17, 17:59
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tiger is extinct
turned loose in complex government environment I
realize men invariably become toxic, symbolizing defeat
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Aug 28 17, 01:08
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slip gloss
symbiotic defeat leaves him alone, pouting
his pucker doesn't match her succulent lip gloss
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Aug 28 17, 23:28
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lying to satisfy
lips gloss youthful area; innocent nubile alibi
giving guys tempting hints of oral play
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Aug 31 17, 07:32
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wittischism
aural play: the heart of puns
they tickle the ear if not the humor
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Aug 31 17, 14:45
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tension results the humor escapes some novice readers so you
insinuate droll obfuscations that need explanations
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Sep 1 17, 14:35
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kneaded explanations often ruin a good pun;
if they don't get it, forget it
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Sep 4 17, 21:24
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finding thought
“forget it” is tough now, so don’t you
imagine thinking nothing through gains insight
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