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 Mar 3 07, 12:37
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I want to pull my body up from
my toes and over my head, so I am inside out. To hide eyes of self-deprecation and ears blasting with screams of lies and deception. I want to bury the foul stench of hypocrisy heaped high on plates of selfishness, which paralyzes from dishonesty as my skin crawls with sneaky spiders leaving every hair standing. To be small and inanimate, let me feel nothing, let my heart be hollow to never bleed. Like a bouncing ball, round and perfectly unnoticed, I want to roll away and hide. ©Linda Balboni 2007 ·······  ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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Mar 5 07, 00:32
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,596 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Wow, Lindi...
I'm sorry that I'd not noticed this one... 'cause it's mighty powerful. I've met this ball, been with a box full of them... and even been this ball. I know the powerful lying truth of this one inside and out. Again, all I can say is WOW! sLightly stunned, Daniel 
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Mar 6 07, 17:48
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Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 1,250 Joined: 2-August 03 From: USA Member No.: 7 Writer of: Poetry |
QUOTE (JustDaniel @ Mar 5 07, 05:32 )  Wow, Lindi... I'm sorry that I'd not noticed this one... 'cause it's mighty powerful. I've met this ball, been with a box full of them... and even been this ball. I know the powerful lying truth of this one inside and out. Again, all I can say is WOW! sLightly stunned, Daniel Hello Daniel,  I appreciate you reading and commenting on another one of my poems! Yes, there are times that life really brings overwhelming challenges. I guess being sensitive,as we are, really brings emotions to the surface! Stay warm and be well.  Lindi ······· ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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Aphrodite Unnoticed Mar 3 07, 12:37 
jgdittier QUOTE (Aphrodite @ Mar 3 07, 17:37 ) I wa... Mar 4 07, 12:27 
Aphrodite QUOTE (jgdittier @ Mar 4 07, 17:27 ) QUOT... Mar 6 07, 17:40 Cleo_Serapis WOW Lindi - what a poignant piece!
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