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May 1 12, 17:48
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breathe deeply and you'll choke at an out house dump
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May 2 12, 08:58
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dump deeply and you'll choke on an out house breath
is equally true, no ?
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May 2 12, 10:47
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breath becomes quite precious when you have been choked
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May 4 12, 15:56
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chocked cables take a bight loose ship with slack slips
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May 4 12, 23:03
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sips soda through his tongue to spit it back out
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May 6 12, 23:54
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out from mouths of sages and sometimes babes pours a suprising wisdom yet known
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May 7 12, 07:42
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gnomes
surround
her garden;
they're guardin' her
plants
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May 9 12, 08:22
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plant a kiss duck her response she will come round quite soon flow'r
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May 9 12, 08:29
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foul, Alan! syllables have multiplied wow!
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May 9 12, 10:04
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Fowl, Daniel ? It is half a damn cinquain ! BIRD !
Alan
plant a kiss duck response she'll come round soon flow'r
Alan
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May 9 12, 10:50
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bird- flipping? I am shocked! second version fine
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May 9 12, 13:12
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fine ? impost not O.K. gentle ribbing light
Alan
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May 9 12, 13:28
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light impost won't break you dig down deeply pay
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May 9 12, 15:22
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pay pipers filling bags before kilties squeeze
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May 9 12, 16:13
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squeeze sports box no effect balls still fly straight press ?
Alan
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May 10 12, 12:22
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press to iron the wrinkles of truth, adding twists
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May 10 12, 16:51
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twists and turns fates conspire perfect outcome whirls
Alan
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May 10 12, 17:41
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whorls spiral on paper to convolute prints
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May 11 12, 00:38
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prince showgirl pre-ordained togetherness snap !
Alan
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May 11 12, 07:43
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snap
opens
revealing
embryonic
thought
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