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Senryu, Japanese form: 5-7-5 or less |
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Mar 2 15, 13:45
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Everlast for nuns who box unruly kid's ears, rulers are too hard
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Mar 2 15, 15:48
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rulers are too hard on poverty-struck subjects compass, protractors
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Mar 3 15, 11:28
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come, pass protractors to all in the circle; we'll go 'round and 'round
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Mar 3 15, 11:37
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we'll go 'round and 'round that well-loved mulberry bush til we all fall down
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Mar 3 15, 11:50
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till the fallow ground manuring and planting seed; soon there will be crops
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Mar 4 15, 11:26
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unhomogenised
soon there will be plops as cows come in for milking and for creaming too
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Mar 4 15, 17:22
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if cream is blue the cow must have dyed; see if it plops
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Mar 4 15, 18:18
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see if it does plop into the jug when milking off to the dairy
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Mar 5 15, 22:14
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often the diary is a mental microscope examining life
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Mar 6 15, 06:28
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examining life may be bloody tricky; often in vein
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Mar 6 15, 23:50
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off Tenth and Vine you can just see Hollywood, cynics and clinics
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Mar 7 15, 02:25
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clinics aren't scenic; an endless line of sick health-seekers
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Mar 8 15, 02:42
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doom-mode health-suckers pronouncements by one and all beware this, don't that
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Mar 8 15, 13:05
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beware this churning out three separate lines; share two impressions
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Mar 8 15, 23:08
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empress shuns to share servants eke out existence gleaning fallen crumbs
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Mar 9 15, 06:37
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gleaning fallen crumbs the dog gummed its food down; bark worse than bite
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Mar 10 15, 14:11
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bite a thin bratwurst and be unsatisfied by the skin on your teeth
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Mar 10 15, 16:43
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skin on your teeth is hard to just brush off; is it human?
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Mar 10 15, 23:22
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humanity is the cannibal of the earth under their façade
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Mar 11 15, 17:48
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Wonder Bread façade: red yellow and blue balloons but white inside
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