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Mar 2 15, 00:01
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young forest ladies feeding on nature’s bounty most will reproduce
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Mar 2 15, 01:17
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most will reproduce themselves in their own image more is the pity
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Mar 2 15, 04:19
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moor becomes potty for roving wild dog pack; bog re-peats itself
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Mar 2 15, 04:46
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blog re-peats itself same thing over and over written by nutter
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Mar 2 15, 09:41
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written in butter the kittens leave their message: melts in mouth and paws
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Mar 2 15, 13:49
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pause while the mouth melts fish swim under river's ice hunger with spring's thaw
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Mar 2 15, 14:28
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hunger, with spring's thaw, gnaws many a youngster's tum renewal, always hunger
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Mar 2 15, 17:05
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gnu always hungry for extra syllables; tries to keep trim
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Mar 3 15, 11:42
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tries to keep trimmer in the locked bathroom cupboard then loses the key
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Mar 3 15, 11:56
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wren loses the key when she's chirping a tune; it's a song complex
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Mar 3 15, 15:22
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complexity’s song aviary in a tree just one mockingbird
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Mar 3 15, 15:55
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just one mockingbird - one mockingbird to many no mimicry please
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Mar 4 15, 10:24
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chimpanzee aping my every movement; quite a tail to tell
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Mar 4 15, 11:11
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quite a tale to tell tall story with extensions lies and statistics
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Mar 4 15, 16:39
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star crosses a line where my clothing is hung; perhaps now it's dry?
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Mar 4 15, 18:30
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Sequiteur ?
perhaps it's too dry voluted sense of humour not laugh but cackle ?
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Mar 5 15, 22:55
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no grackle laughing bird aren't very humorous kookaburras are
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Mar 6 15, 06:48
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kooky burro got his pack in a wad: get off my back!
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Mar 8 15, 02:59
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get off my broad back and stand on your own two feet for I am crumbling
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Mar 8 15, 13:13
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Just a reminder: 5-7-5 does not a haiku make.
There are to be two separate impressions, one usually of one line and the other of two juxtaposed upon one another in a single piece.
The lines are usually to be of 5, 7, and 5 syllables OR LESS.
The subject matter is normally of natural phenomena or seasons.
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