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Larry
post Mar 2 15, 00:01
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young forest ladies
feeding on nature’s bounty
most will reproduce


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Alan
post Mar 2 15, 01:17
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most will reproduce
themselves in their own image
more is the pity

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post Mar 2 15, 04:19
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moor becomes potty
for roving wild dog pack;
bog re-peats itself


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post Mar 2 15, 04:46
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blog re-peats itself
same thing over and over
written by nutter

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post Mar 2 15, 09:41
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written in butter
the kittens leave their message:
melts in mouth and paws


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post Mar 2 15, 13:49
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pause while the mouth melts
fish swim under river's ice
hunger with spring's thaw


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post Mar 2 15, 14:28
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hunger, with spring's thaw,
gnaws many a youngster's tum
renewal, always hunger

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post Mar 2 15, 17:05
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gnu always hungry
for extra syllables;
tries to keep trim


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post Mar 3 15, 11:42
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tries to keep trimmer
in the locked bathroom cupboard
then loses the key

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post Mar 3 15, 11:56
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wren loses the key
when she's chirping a tune;
it's a song complex


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post Mar 3 15, 15:22
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complexity’s song
aviary in a tree
just one mockingbird


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post Mar 3 15, 15:55
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just one mockingbird -
one mockingbird to many
no mimicry please

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post Mar 4 15, 10:24
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chimpanzee aping
my every movement;
quite a tail to tell


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post Mar 4 15, 11:11
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quite a tale to tell
tall story with extensions
lies and statistics

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post Mar 4 15, 16:39
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star crosses a line
where my clothing is hung;
perhaps now it's dry?


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post Mar 4 15, 18:30
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Sequiteur ?

perhaps it's too dry
voluted sense of humour
not laugh but cackle ?

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post Mar 5 15, 22:55
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no grackle laughing
bird aren't very humorous
kookaburras are


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post Mar 6 15, 06:48
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kooky burro got
his pack in a wad:
get off my back!


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post Mar 8 15, 02:59
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get off my broad back
and stand on your own two feet
for I am crumbling

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post Mar 8 15, 13:13
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Just a reminder: 5-7-5 does not a haiku make.

There are to be two separate impressions, one usually of one line and the other of two juxtaposed upon one another in a single piece.

The lines are usually to be of 5, 7, and 5 syllables OR LESS.

The subject matter is normally of natural phenomena or seasons.


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