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Jul 13 17, 01:24
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Your lesson writing short rondeau is, First decide the closing line, then open with it in a show that you are someone with a spine
who won't lose focus in the end because you're writin' while you're dressin'. be sure the shortie here has penned your lesson.
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Jul 13 17, 21:52
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that’s “shorty”
The shorty penned here has a sure but simple form which one must keep so all the Short Rondeaus endure and benefit writers who leap from regular Rondeaus. The change is difficult but if you’re smart you’ll twist a phrase and rearrange the short.
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Jul 14 17, 14:42
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To twist a phrase and rearrange the words a bit is what we do; to others it appears as strange and often make a hoop-di-doo
about our writing, but who cares? Our rondeax come with rais-ed fist that causes multimillionaires to twist!
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Jul 16 17, 22:12
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That cause is multimillionaires who have agendas of their own and squelch the politicians cares with money voters don’t condone.
New laws are passed that fit their need by writing in a hidden clause and there are none who dare impede that cause.
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Jul 17 17, 00:05
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The pants you wear cannot impede the liquid that resides inside; with age some shorts become in-peed and that's a fact that's hard to hide.
Long shirts can cover many things like wet spots that your wee-wee plants and bulging guts your body brings to pants.
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Jul 17 17, 21:44
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The guts your bulging bodies bring to gyms is fat which stays in place and everything just seems to cling then you might liposuction face. Your choice of swallowing those chews of pies or cakes and favorite cuts can be left off if you can use the guts.
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Jul 18 17, 17:48
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Leave off devouring all those pies and cakes and pastry till you burst then eating anything your eyes desire like you've become accursed.
If you can simply shut your mouth when you see that you've had enough you'll watch that fat that hangs down south leave off.
© MLeeDickensson 2017
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Jul 20 17, 12:58
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Down South your watch that’s fat and hangs to parts which you might think are safe below your belt will cause some pangs when swinging like demented wraith.
Your vest has pockets you should use for golden chains; the word of mouth is shorten it. You won’t abuse down south.
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Jul 21 17, 15:26
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Abusing short folks isn't cool on days like what we're having here unless you throw them in the pool if they don't have a drowning fear.
In cut-off denims, weather's fine and in the pool your dwarf cavorts; your scissors were not out of line abusing shorts.
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Jul 24 17, 17:56
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Your sisters were not out of line with words to put you in your place; in fact, intentions were divine as though they came from God’s own grace.
Experience with boys your age helped them to raise you; one of His with hopes of one more pristine page. Yours is!
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Aug 24 17, 16:59
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Pristine describes my page these days since nothing there appears at all; I've tried to write in many ways; my muse's engine's in a stall.
At times a word or two contains research, but then they fall between my thoughts, so paper now remains pristine.
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Aug 25 17, 17:57
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Safe Keeping
My thoughts on paper now remain within a box that’s sealed, air tight to ward off fire or moisture’s stain and safe from degradation’s plight.
Although technologies afford with cloud or disc that can be bought a safer way; that box will hoard my thought.
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Aug 28 17, 01:28
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A Safeway grocery store is where we shopped when I was very young; In junior high I dropped in there in back to see what they had flung.
I'd never eat what wasn't wrapped, like cookies they and thrown away. When I was done, went home and napped safe way.
P.S. I never really did that; it never occurred to me!
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Aug 28 17, 23:28
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Fountain of Youth
When done with naps and home I went into the woods where I commune with nature when there’s just a hint of Autumn in the air. Too soon and Summer’s heat burns up the joy as animals hide from the sun. Refreshed, I feel like a young boy when done.
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Sep 1 17, 15:06
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Fountain of Youth?
Ah, refreshing... he drank from canteen after time on the trail; he drank more, and though it was not cold, it was clean since he'd gathered it fresh from the shore of the mountainside stream on his trek. Now a pain in his groin was enmeshing his nerves all the way to his neck... Ah, refreshing.
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Sep 4 17, 21:23
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Nervous Rex
His nerves way up into his neck were sensitive when he was young so fearlessly said, “What the heck!” when on patrol; way out among
rice paddies and the jungle heat. Respect for everyone who serves was not the norm and pills now treat his nerves.
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Oct 26 17, 09:22
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Pilloried
My pills now treat the maladies of age and time, cholesterol; and my blood pressure does not please the doctor that I have at all so now I have to take great care to hide them from kids seeking thrills for they’re expensive. I don’t share my pills.
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Oct 27 17, 23:36
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Heavy Debt
It's so expensive, I must cut away some pounds from off my hips and also off my gut and butt. I've eaten too much chips and dips and haven't exercised at all. My therapy is quite extensive: stretching, pushing on a ball... and it's expensive!
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Oct 30 17, 08:50
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futility
You’re pushing on some balls that stretch those muscles which you’ve hardly used until it seems like you could retch and your poor body feels abused but you persist in exercise to lose some weight, gain younger tone; shed inches from your waist and thighs you’re pushing on.
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Oct 30 17, 10:30
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Waist and Waste
My thighs and waist are out to shape so every exercise is pain; if only there were some escape, but I must do each rep again. My muscles left some time ago, so they will not return with haste. It doesn't take too much to show my thighs are waste.
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