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| Guest_ohsteve_* |
 Nov 2 07, 14:29
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Of Growing Old
My body aches, while I listen to the voices in my head. Wordless noises a brief susurration. Pains of arthritis, old age, and brittle bones. What happened to the golden times of retirement and relaxation? |
  
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Nov 3 07, 12:05
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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 544 Joined: 3-May 07 From: Central Florida Member No.: 427 Real Name: Judith Labriola Writer of: Poetry |
QUOTE (ohsteve @ Nov 2 07, 15:29 ) [snapback]104022[/snapback] Of Growing Old
My body aches, while I listen to the voices in my head. Wordless noises a brief susurration. Pains of arthritis, old age, and brittle bones. What happened to the golden times of retirement and relaxation? ·······  ······· |
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Nov 3 07, 12:07
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 544 Joined: 3-May 07 From: Central Florida Member No.: 427 Real Name: Judith Labriola Writer of: Poetry |
Hi Steve...
I am beginning to think they call it the "golden years" because that's when they give gold shots for arthritis....hah...great poem and I have no nits...God Bless, Judi ······· ······· |
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| Guest_ohsteve_* |
Nov 3 07, 13:16
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Judi thanks for reading and the comment, my golden years are just copper...lol...
Steve |
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| Guest_Xanadu_* |
Nov 5 07, 19:22
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Boy, oh boy!! Do I know how you feel! Well said.
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| Guest_Rosemerta_* |
Nov 5 07, 20:04
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Hi Steve,
You caught the spirit of 'my moment' **S** most vividly. Well worded as usual. I can definately relate as I sit here with a heating pad wrapped around my knee. I'm still waiting for the gold...perhaps I overslept when it was being passed out. ~~ Jackie |
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| Guest_ohsteve_* |
Nov 11 07, 10:45
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Thanks Linda and Jackie for reading and commenting... Amazing how fast the years mount up...LOL.
Steve |
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