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Feb 4 24, 20:33
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Jock strap's migration could cause you constipation; you may go on runs Called bipolar intestines by pejorative wordsmiths
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Feb 6 24, 12:44
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Pejorative words can’t stop intestinal run and it is absurd to think that once we’ve begun it’s hard to quit having fun.
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Feb 7 24, 11:50
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You quit having fun rising on wrong side of bed The wall should have been your first clue it's the wrong side Roll over and take a nap!
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Feb 12 24, 02:35
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Short naps are quite nice; just roll over and then snore. Warnings should suffice. In recliners, it’s a chore; roll over and hit the floor.
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Feb 12 24, 07:38
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rolled back and hit floor last night in the recliner game in last minutes wife and daughter had to lift the chair back onto its feet!
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Feb 13 24, 19:54
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Chair back on its feet! Was my Tanka prophetic? Chagrin is complete. Hope all is copasetic and I am sympathetic.
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Feb 14 24, 09:18
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I am pathetic needing help to get around can't even drive yet I'm concerned about Eileen that I'll simply wear her out
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Feb 15 24, 01:30
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You won’t wear her out for Eileen is your life-mate. I have little doubt your improvement will be great and those concerns will abate.
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Feb 15 24, 05:24
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My worms will be bait for the hook of the tanka with which you respond but will it be a floater or sink on down to flounder?
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Feb 17 24, 12:35
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Flounder in the sink is much too large to filet. Therefore, one would think, for the halibut I’d say you might save your sole today.
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Feb 18 24, 12:39
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save your soles today by stuffing shoes with cardboard so feet won't be bare sometimes the road can be rough so give yourself some padding
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Feb 22 24, 12:48
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Padding yourself gives protection from broken bones. The longer one lives, weight gains in pounds or in stones ain’t what a doctor condones.
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Feb 23 24, 04:11
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what your doc condones is what increases his fees feels it in his bones like he has a case of fleas ... think he's going to the dogs?
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Feb 27 24, 12:31
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Going to the dogs are fleas and ticks from your yard. Use good insect fogs Which help to kill or retard. That is not a base canard.
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Feb 27 24, 14:42
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not a base canard that I see the end of life with most purpose gone man begins to die when born and the process finds its end
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Mar 4 24, 11:42
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The process’s ends are set before life begins. The time that one spends that gift should be free of sins. On this, your reward depends.
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Mar 4 24, 15:21
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Your reward deepens in experience's well so immerse yourself Dive deep into the issues turning all of their pages
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Mar 8 24, 19:06
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All pages have turned and yet my life’s book still grows. Reviewing what’s learned may be helpful, I suppose but changes come from… Who knows?
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Mar 9 24, 10:06
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Many changes come from places not imagined amazing our minds Who knows what the future holds and what will hold us in it?
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Mar 19 24, 09:26
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In what will hold us through our transitory time, we like to discuss unknown things until we’re slime but some know we are sublime.
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