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Assyrian
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Sometimes here, seems far away, when you're in the lounge, early morning seems to orchestrate yet prevaricates, the possibility of personal change. Wish this could last, longer than a radio show; caught in this rare-field where there is no movement beyond these summoned thoughts
Original Sometimes here, seems far away, when you're in the lounge, morning seems to orchestrate yet prevaricates, the possibility of personal change. Wish this could last, longer than a radio show; caught in this rare-field amber: where there is no movement beyond these thoughts summoned. |
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